Willie_Lombard

The idea of your story is great it’s just your grammar is horrible mate making it hard to read

So confusing with all the name changes probably why this novel isint as popular as it should be

Why is the story chapters not in order(well some of them). It’s a great story but so confusing to read

Really enjoying this so far mate

Hi mate to be honest I really like your work. The reason I gave a one to writing quality is because there are no paragraphs and it’s hard to read

So from chapter 42 it’s raw so thinking of supporting you is out of the question. I’m dropping this take care

Just for doing that to Brandon and the states you can shove your book up your anus

Is this another minato kushina novel I won’t bother at all

Is this another one of those where writer makes a Minato and kushina couple if it is I’ll be really disappointed