Amazing cover and storyline, engaging characters and interesting plots. great quality work, highly recommend. The author is so badass for this, i salute ya!

Great novel, full five star review, there are only eight chapters for now, so I will come again after a thorough reading. Good luck! I love the name Alisha btw! keep writing!

What a wordsmith! ............................................................ amazing story, i love it!

I really like eastern fantasy the wuxia stuff and this novel is superb. I liked the synopsis and the world building the names and literally everything. The writing style is very good.

Not now but i would suggest you to rewrite some paragraphs. Dont use too much 'that's why' Try to show more emotions and try to show not tell. Like the cold bridge para...you could have written a little more descriptive and full of emotions. Show the surroundings as well.

She is getting startled a lot.....

Right its getting good

That was a huge para but i had fun

The bike man

Shirtless llolllll

I don't if its okay to go with exactly look and stuff but its better than lengthy explanation

Good chapter well written

Writing Quality is fantastic and story development is likeable and very interesting. Character design is secretive and very beautiful. I really loved the two MC and their chemistry is hooking me to the story already. the background is unique and one can imagine it like a movie through the well-explained description. the transition of her childhood and the academy was a little vague and I thought the girl was already old enough. tbh the academy came like a surprise to me. and then Ramien as well.