kkworld

Amazing cover and storyline, engaging characters and interesting plots. great quality work, highly recommend. The author is so badass for this, i salute ya!

Great novel, full five star review, there are only eight chapters for now, so I will come again after a thorough reading. Good luck! I love the name Alisha btw! keep writing!

What a wordsmith! ............................................................ amazing story, i love it!

I really like eastern fantasy the wuxia stuff and this novel is superb. I liked the synopsis and the world building the names and literally everything. The writing style is very good.

Not now but i would suggest you to rewrite some paragraphs. Dont use too much 'that's why' Try to show more emotions and try to show not tell. Like the cold bridge para...you could have written a little more descriptive and full of emotions. Show the surroundings as well.

She is getting startled a lot.....

Right its getting good

That was a huge para but i had fun

The bike man

Shirtless llolllll