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zoron2yrReplied to The_Hand- zoron2yrPosted
This novel was good with no romance/harem and a seemingly evil MC.. and he was until the Hokage appeared... The author did the thing that makes me cringe with making the 3rd Hokage "evil" which automatically makes me want to drop the story so unless someone can covince me with a reason for the Hokage being evil I remain unconvinced... also the MC saw it in the Hokage's eye(?).
- zoron2yrReplied to IAmJustBored
He means tags nowhere does it say AU
The most distinctive feature was his face that screamed the word wisdom, and the red coloured hat he had on top of his head which had the phrase Hokage on it. Looking at everyone frozen and gobsmacked expressions with an amused look, he nodded and took out the pipe that was currently lit up out of his mouth. - zoron2yrPosted
This novel could have been great but it suffers from a "tribulation:" that a lot of these discreet ancestor novels face.. the main character not being the main character. See if you dont know what that means let me explain, in this novel it feels as if the MC is a side character in multiple other people's story and it does not really change and as the story goes along the ONLY thing he does is to vaguely get stronger (though we never really see the effects of that due to him relying on the system) and helping his descendants and thats it, there is really nothing that benefits him other than faith in which he invests back into his descendants. So dont waste your fast passes.
- zoron2yrReplied to Asahi21
Though I dont know if he used it but there is a spell for that which I think is "Tempus" it checks the time for you
Next is the issue of Hogwarts. For a proclaimed safest place in England, From troll to basilisk, dementors, etc. it sure felt a lot more dangerous in the books. It's dangerous enough as it is, let alone getting involved and helping main characters which will have the danger level hit through the roof. No helping (or even interacting with them) will have to wait till I am strong enough and even then if it directly helps me in one way or another. Hey don't judge me, I am a pragmatic person and this world is a dangerous place where every wizard or witch carry weapons of mass destruction(wand) even if they don't realize it and ministry is not competent enough to make me feel safe (Not when minister of magic prefers to bury his head in the sand instead of facing problem even if it hits him in the face) and given that teachers have low regard for students safety, some even like to outright bully them(read Severus Snape). It's bad enough when the headmaster of school likes to give second chances to everyone like they are going out of style, what's worse is that he is chief warlock who presides over the wizarding court. Yup, laying low till I am strong enough is the way to go. - zoron2yrCommented
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This chapter has been deleted. - zoron2yrPosted
Though there isn't enough chapters to particularly define the whole story it is enough for me to think that if you do the story right it would be a pretty good read so don't drop it like most good novels do nowadays....*sigh*
This book has been deleted. - zoron2yrPosted
I love <3 this story for 3 reasons.... The MC is not a dense isekai protagonist like most fanfic on this website that honestly most of the time just aim for a harem MC is caculative and will not hesitate to do something if its for his own profits and towards his own goal. The system is also a very progressive system where it grows along side its user instead of the user growing with the system...MC is extremely smart and we can see that from the beggining with how he does things and has no reaction to human death. . I am going to wait till this stockpiles to binge but I love this novel with an Anti-Hero that does whatever is needed to get to his goal but the other reason I love this novel is because the Author is consistent..well at least till now with his daily uploads . Love It <3<3<3 . 5✨ 5✨ 5✨ 5✨ 5✨ PERFECTION
- zoron2yrPosted
This Novel is really good and one of the only things I had a pet peeve about is how naïve he is but I know thats a plot points but its just irritating sometimes I mean I feel like he thinks that everything will go his way..well at least from where I am right now but when I thought back to the story when he died he got the Happiness System because that was the type of system for his naïve and positive type but instead got a system that was for the cold and ruthless type and CLEARLY Pupa does not understand this either. . . So overall the author put a lot of care in this story Love It <3