OrdinaryRandom
Hello my name is, Random. I'm an author. Is there anything else to say?
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OrdinaryRandom4 years agoReplied to Ian_Gopezwell, keep writing and read more books
- OrdinaryRandom4 years agoReplied to Athena_Amor
I Became An AntiHero
- OrdinaryRandom4 years agoCommented
Wanna review the swap? I'll read and review your novel and you can read and review mine? reviews need to be honest
- OrdinaryRandom4 years agoPosted
It's a hot mess, do not read this don't even try you won't be able to. Grammar is none existent. I would've recommended that the author use Grammarly but I doubt that it could help. read some good books author.
- OrdinaryRandom4 years agoPosted
All you lack is writing quality, apart from that you have everything. Myah seems like a good character although his design is quite feminine ;) Keep up the good work. I've read 3 chapters till now and apart from the grammar, everything is nice.
- OrdinaryRandom4 years agoCommented
Myah's background is tragic, and his uncle betraying him is even more tragic.
- OrdinaryRandom4 years agoReplied to Traenson
I think that's what he's doing... no offense author.
- OrdinaryRandom4 years agoCommented
dude, you can't describe stats with "Average" it needs to be a number. just don't add a system if you're going to write average
- OrdinaryRandom4 years agoCommented
A demonic-looking angel? yeah right
- OrdinaryRandom4 years agoCommented
Hey! your novel doesn't have any reviews. Mind if we review swap? I'll review yours and in exchange, you can review mine. if you don't want to just delete this comment.
