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HalfWeeb

HalfWeeb

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Hi, I am HalfWeeb and a half weeb. I have a day job but I spend my nights trying to pass off my caffeine overdose by gaming, reading mangas, and writing novels for fun. ✉ : Half-Weeb@outlook.com

2021-06-09 JoinedGlobal
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  • HalfWeeb
    HalfWeeb10mth
    Replied to FerriticMatrix

    Ah, thank you for the clarification. I know it's totally possible, but was wondering because the level of technology and mode of governance portrayed in Adhania seemed equivalent to the Greek classical era, which would have made it very hard to rule over such a large expanse of land.

    And knowing this Lord Prantik was generous enough to give the estimated distance they were from Zanzan, which ranged from 250 to 300 km from him, and that put their lands around the center of the province, which was around 600 km from north to south.
    altalt
    Herald of Steel
    War · FerriticMatrix
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  • HalfWeeb
    HalfWeeb10mth
    Commented

    I don't know if it is intentional or simply an oversight, but according to those maths, Zanzan would be approximately the size of Spain. Considering there is about 12 province like Zanzan in Adhania, this would make a single kingdom of this world, Adhania, insanely large. Unlikely, but possible. I was simply wondering if this design was intentional as it would make Adhania landmass comparable to half of Europe.

    And knowing this Lord Prantik was generous enough to give the estimated distance they were from Zanzan, which ranged from 250 to 300 km from him, and that put their lands around the center of the province, which was around 600 km from north to south.
    altalt
    Herald of Steel
    War · FerriticMatrix
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  • HalfWeeb
    HalfWeeb2yr
    Replied to kreig

    Yeah, couldn't really resist the temptation

    What's In the Box?
    altalt
    Omnia Sidera: Spaceship Soldier In The Fantasy World
    Fantasy · HalfWeeb
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  • HalfWeeb
    HalfWeeb2yr
    Posted

    Author here: welcome everyone to this side project of mine. This is my first time ever writing anything else than computer code so any constructive comments are appreciated. I would like to know what you like or dislike about the story or my writing style in order to deliver higher-quality chapters. As for the story, It tries to not take itself too seriously as it is supposed to be a power fantasy where the main character has an obvious edge compared to others. However, I tried to avoid making him completely and utterly invincible by still throwing him in dangerous situations where his life might be at stake. Since the story is still in its infancy, I don't know yet if I want to focus on the "adventurer" or on the "kingdom building" route, so please let me know what you would find interesting. Have a nice one everyone!

    altalt
    Omnia Sidera: Spaceship Soldier In The Fantasy World
    Fantasy · HalfWeeb
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