Kint0Zun

He cursed the way he cursed was magnificent 😭🙏

I can already tell this is gonna be peak. Don't let anyone else dissuade you from writing a story you want.

I like how the author implemented the healing ability. He can't overuse it but can utilize it as a sort of evasive to throw off his enemies and kill them with his skill like a gauge in videogames where he can use it a few times before it has a cooldown. so now there can still be the threat of death while highlighting the mc's adaptability. W author.

I'm sorry but if your novel has a "Harem" then its bad. automatically. I don't give a damn if its the most beautiful well written piece of fiction there is. if ya can't stay loyal to one girl then your a freak that's that.

How did aizawa manage to even damage bro spiderman can tank friggin pumpkin bombs and attacks from legit super humans. aizawa is just a guy with glowy eyes and his power doesn't even work on him. Pretty sure if aizawa punched him his hand would break.

W

Pretty decent start if I have to say but it was a bit short then most fanfics.