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This excerpt takes place in the middle of the novel. After reading your comment I'm reevaluating the buildup to this scene, as I understand it could come across as sudden. To show that it takes place later on in the story I edited the title of the chapter to reflect that. Thanks for the critique. I'm going to take this into account :D