haha, it's alright.

thank you!

xD sorry.

fixed thank you. :)

thanks for bringing it to attention, fixed them.

sorry to disappoint. 😅

I tried to add a lot of jokes but many did not get them. But also some jokes are just straight up terrible. so my fault

fixed.

thank you! :)

thanks for pointing out fixed it.

maybe

Noted, I am fixing the grammar and spelling errors.

thank you 😊

good good

it's hooks you up from the very beginning, the flag scene from very begaining is very cool, imaginative, the plot looks so far so good. the game kinda points element, sounds interesting waiting to see more of the starfire system. keep it up 🙂

wow

the start is really good, writing quality is top notch. the story is told really well, from the first chapter you already come to know about the world and the scene where grandpa tell that he dies to night, just love it.

the story is interesting, that intro, Oof. I like how the chapters are from point of view of different characters. it's a whole new concept to me. I like this concept, it's something I did like to see more of.

oof

The writing is so good, it makes you imagine the scenes, it forces you in to the story. like you will be immersed in it. imagining it as you read it. the story seems very interesting, the synopsis is the eye catcher, it makes you curious. I can vouch for the story, you will enjoy this.