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snshijuptr10mthReplied to RmoodzCh 301 Chapter 62- snshijuptr1yrPosted
I adored My Once Handsome Husband, and I really wanted to love this book. The author can legit write, but things fell off a bit in this story. It started off really strong, but around the middle it got rocky. The plot judges one character for "putting everyone in danger", then the ML does the same thing. The ML is in a rush to kill the dragons that day, despite how much easier it would be if they just wait a day. Everyone is broken and bruised and magically better the next night. This could have been solved with the occasional "they rested a week". I just couldn't finish it when I hit the "FL suffers depression so ML can surprise her" ending, especially when both characters' growth was all about not keeping secrets.
- snshijuptr1yrCommented
I really like this story, but this is starting to be too unbelievable. She has no idea of the basics of s*x and natural birth control, yet she lives among pirates and her mother is a healer. Mason has only done procreative s*x with her? No foreplay? The man was a cad and likely surrounded by people who were very concerned about potential illegitimate heirs.
Ch 209 Fires Inside - snshijuptr1yrCommented
The pirates are all gonna be like "Oh, wait, you were trying to keep that a secret as you mooned over each other in this tiny cavern and before that on our tiny ship." 😆
"So tomorrow night, when we all march together to attack the dragon, know I won't just be fighting for my own life. I'll be fighting for the lives of all of you that I consider my family... And I will be fighting for the life of the woman I love." - snshijuptr1yrCommented
LOL, I thought she was pivoting to make him talk about his plans for the dragons. 😆
She smiled before he moved, sweeping her up into his arms. She gasped and threw her arms around his neck. - snshijuptr1yrCommented
Makes me wonder what their sleeping arrangement looked like. 😅
The three slept most of the day, and when they finally woke up for good, the sun was just starting to sink out of sight. Thunder rumbled in the distance, and a cool breeze blew, signaling wet and chilly weather ahead for them. They ate the rest of their crab from that morning and prepared to go. - snshijuptr1yrCommented
Riftan, take notes. This is how you protect someone you care about from the big dangerous world. Give them the skills to protect themselves.
"Although it is always best to start with the basics, we shall skip ahead to some practical techniques since we are short on time. You must make up for your lack of stamina by catching your enemy off guard. Aim for a critical blow. A knife to the chest is always effective, or a strike between the ribs, aiming for the heart or lungs. Either will be instantly fatal. However, that requires both strength and skill, and it would be difficult with monsters of the Ayin race that are more often than not wearing breastplates. Since your enemy will be more guarded if you fail on the first try, you must strike where a fatal blow is most likely. Aim for visible vital points. That would be the eyes, throat, and abdomen. Even if the blow doesn't kill your enemy, it should give you enough time to escape or protect yourself." - snshijuptr1yrReplied to Sampaguita1374Ch 252 Chapter 13
- snshijuptr1yrCommented
Thank goodness somebody realizes he's a grown man and can't go into a married woman's bedroom.
The servants began lugging their things up the stairs. Though it appeared Ulyseon wanted to keep conversing with Maxi, a sentry held him back. He reluctantly left with the other men. - snshijuptr1yrCommented
Says the woman who notoriously had several children with a married man!
"And in case you've forgotten, the only reason he's aboard this ship at all is because we are sailing him to The Red Lands where he will marry a Princess!" - snshijuptr1yrCommented
Again? [img=thinking]
He hadn't met a woman yet who could manage it and he didn't want to drag anyone down to the depths he could plunge when he lost control... Not again... - snshijuptr1yrCommented
This reminds me of how Delaney was awestruck the first time she went to the Pirate Kings's house.
As they walked, Ilona couldn't stop her eyes from shooting from one thing to the next, taking in paintings, sculptures, tapestries, and every other wonder that hung on these walls. She also noticed on the floor beneath them a long, scarlet carpet with golden stitching, looking more luxuriant than anything on the floors at her father's estate. - snshijuptr1yrCommented
Says the woman who caused an avalanche that destroyed an entire monster army.
Studying with them had allowed Maxi to master a variety of spells at pace. However, she felt that she was growing further away from the mage she dreamed of becoming the more time she spent at Nome Hall. Strictly speaking, earth mages were closer to craftsmen than spell-casters. - snshijuptr1yrReplied to Sandsea212
I was just thinking about how it all comes full circle
With a sigh, Maxi trailed Anette into the communal workshop. It was a space mainly used by the novices of Nome Hall. Inside, the first thing she saw was the huge furnace spitting out flames. The Godric brothers were busy tossing charcoal and firewood into the chute. A man, who was fairly tall for someone of the Umri tribe, vigorously worked the bellows beneath the structure. Next to the furnace, four other novices of short stature were hammering away at a steel plate. They all seemed to be working on a magical device. - snshijuptr1yrReplied to Wan_Chu
Yeah, Agnes is a good friend to them both. Riftan just lacks any emotional maturity
"Your meddling is not welcome. I will not stand for any interference in my marriage again." - snshijuptr1yrReplied to Browneyesblkdragon
And saved his butt.
"Stay out of my affairs," Riftan snarled, whirling to face her. - snshijuptr1yrCommented
OMG, people, she is his friend. She noticed his emotions and got him out of the room. She's checking in with him. Of course she knows he's upset.
Agnes chased after him. "Are you truly all right?" - snshijuptr1yrCommented
And the poor man spends the next couple of years trying to reconcile the fantasy and reality
She did not exist in places like this. She existed solely in reality. - snshijuptr1yrCommented
Remember that the spell that Ruth used that Riftan got addicted to was the same illusion spell meant to confuse enemy combatants. This scene is both romantic and completely logical. ♥️
Riftan slowly blinked. When the mist lifted, he saw a woman standing in the wind, her hair blowing like flickering flames. A halo of light revealed a pale face with cheeks rosy from the cold. He groaned as something lurched in his chest. His whole body trembled with frustration, despair, and resignation. It was always her. If one were to peer into the deepest depths of his heart, there she would be. - snshijuptr1yrCommented
Ruth can keep up by warming himself and otherwise caring for his needs with magic.
Noticing that the firestone he was clasping had run out of mana, Ruth cursed and flung it away. "Let us not tarry. Once we destroy the rune responsible for the barrier, the mana distribution will normalize as well."