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Raph_ael5mthPostedsooooooooo bad I think the author is a kid or around that. if not he probably has mental issues which I hope he can recover from. to understand the story you have to read his comments cuz otherwise there are holes in the plot for example in the early chapter I'm said that training for 1 min gave him 10 exp and to become *masterful* at a certain skill he has to accumulate 8500 that's like 14 hours but he training for days (not stated how many but days) and only becomes an apprentice which is like 5 or 4 steps away form master ful. and let's not talk about the humor that the mc/author has. he's name is bang just because and I quote "its funny imagine... lord bang hehehe god B.A.N.G hehehe XD xd" wtf is this??? one chapter hes in a delima do I drink the blood of human to survive or not he does after much hesitation but the next chapter he's joking about drinking human "juice" wtf man. if you want to read because you want to torture yourself go ahead other than that don't.
- Raph_ael5mthReplied to dmacrulz
I think the author is a kid or still in his emo period cuz that's his humor. He thinks that's funny
"Apprentice? Seriously? Are you pulling my wing here? I've been slogging away in this dark, gloomy pit for days, and all I get is an 'Apprentice' badge? Give me a break!" Bong's frustration was palpable as he ranted at the system's proficiency level alert, his bat-like expression resembling a mix of disbelief and annoyance. - Raph_ael5mthReplied to Promezus
how about using chat gbt to convey your thoughts next time cuz what you said and what u wrote have nothing in common.just use chat gbt man feed it your novel and make it into your own editor so you don't have to pay anyone a cut.
As he withdrew, his eyes were haunted by what he had done. He had taken a life, even if it was to save his own. The weight of his actions hung heavy on his conscience, but survival had prevailed over morality in that crucial moment. - Raph_ael5mthCommentedCh 98 Memories of a Forgotten Past
- Raph_ael6mthReplied to Dao13ofbook
to them (the insects)
The insects, confused by my sudden intrusion, left me alone as they reluctantly approached the Mat'ahar, giving me the chance to get closer to them. - Raph_ael1yrCommentedCh 85 The syndicate
- Raph_ael1yrReplied to VividlyLucid29
yea since when does being half beast help with aura? aura is humans specialty not beasts he's at a disadvantage if anything the physique thing might pass but not enough info is available to judge
After all, even if they were fictional, the authors and creators tended to put a lot of time into working out the practicality of attacks so their readers wouldn't complain about it being too unrealistic. - Raph_ael1yrCommented
well deserved pat tbh, if I could I would too
[[Author : See how far I had planned even a year and a half ago when I started this novel? This is how you connect all dots in a homogeneous world-building. *pats myself on the shoulder shamelessly*]] - Raph_ael1yrReplied to Firecat22Ch 58 Toward the Central Continent
- Raph_ael1yrReplied to Eric_Fanguy
or maybe he's Edward
One day, the Nine Guardians found themselves engaged in a great battle against two of the Five Calamities. Valok, the Demon God of the Abyss, and Ramauris, the Demon God of the Undead. - Raph_ael1yrReplied to DeQuindrick
4th. hes ranked 5 but is in 4th realm.
Although Marcus was only a wizard of the 3rd realm, the fact that he could use necromancy spells gave him a great advantage over Aylinor who was a wizard of the 4th realm capable of using plague magic. Only now the priest had realized that his opponent could not only face him on equal terms but could also defeat him. - Raph_ael1yrCommented
140,000 years ago was the 4th era not 3rd
This paragraph has been deleted. - Raph_ael1yrCommented
it took him hour n half to get there?
Almost an hour and a half ago, Marcus had discovered that the monsters attacking the city were being controlled by someone else. Furthermore, each monster had an energy trail that linked them to the thaumaturge that was controlling them. If he followed the energy trail it was highly likely that he would meet the one responsible for the attack on the city. - Raph_ael1yrReplied to Buffnerd
no
'Holy cow! I had heard that Asrakians were big, but this woman is even bigger than the large skeleton!' Marcus was a bit shocked by the clan leader. After all, this was his first encounter with a non-human. - Raph_ael1yrReplied to William_Claw
nah humans r wack
At that moment, Marcus defined what would be his new line of thinking and decided that if necessary he would stain his hands with blood, no regrets, no looking back. All for survival. - Raph_ael1yrReplied to HuddleGuddle
o wise one
Vitality: 62 Wisdom: 78 - Raph_ael1yrCommented
aka I don't want to write the skills and their lvls again
'Okay... System, open only my general stats.' - Raph_ael1yrReplied to Raph_ael
future me: ok thank u for not listening to me
When it was only a few feet away, the centipede opened its maw exhaling its corrosive poisonous breath on the trant lord who was quickly covered by a cloud of corrosive purple gas. - Raph_ael1yrCommented
you traitor m f how could you forget your only friend
'Oh... At least I got something good after all. Well, I guess I'll just wait until the sun goes down... Ah... Forget Willson on the island!' - Raph_ael1yrReplied to Runaway_Cactuar
lol
"Orders from the higher-ups. There was a level 5 catastrophe and we're short-staffed. But to tell you the truth I'd rather be running over people than solving this problem."