She should be

I like the way you describe the looks of the person

She was thinking funny things even in serious situations. Definitely not normal

I like the fact that it has a mixture of fantasy and modern at the same time. Keep it up, author!

A perfect place to hide something

I can relate🙋🏻‍♀️🙋🏻‍♀️🙋🏻‍♀️

True fact! Hopefully, the author did not make her look too brave or something which is a plus point!

The first chapter was fun to read. It clearly shows the potential of the story and how skilled the author is! Good job!

I am feeling an urge to see the slender man😂😂😂

It's really typical

I have to praise her personality

Oh My God!!!!!!!!!!! The beginning is superb! I really got goosebumps reading it! So cool and intriguing! You gave us a glimpse of how the story is going to be in the first chapter! I love it!

I love the synopsis! It's short but doesn't make it difficult to understand what's going on. Breta is a really complicated character and most authors try to avoid writing about these characters. But you described the character well and amazingly! Good work!