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Hardik_Yadav_41212mthCommentedFor the first time it's pretty good author-san , keep it up .
[A/N: I'm planning to end the first arc in this series in the next chapter, maybe two. I'll call it 'New world-arc' as it was Yatora's start in the new world. Following the end of this arc, there will be two arcs, that are completely AU, until the Chunin exam starts, which will be the next arc from the series. This was my first time ever writing a real fighting scene with magic and stuff, so I'd appreciate a little feedback to how it was and what I can improve on]- Hardik_Yadav_41212mthReplied to ptbv
probably all seized because of his father found guilty
As it turns out, Ronan's father is a death eater, currently in Azkaban. This came as a big surprise for him because this meant that he would have to work a lot harder than before to get into the good books of the good guys. This also meant that he wouldn't have to work too hard to blend in his own house, which was a good thing as well. - Hardik_Yadav_41214mthCommented
no
Or do You won't harem? đđđ - Hardik_Yadav_41215mthReplied to 2323w
this scene , can you tell me where it is from?
The book he was reading had a pretty advanced title called "The Way of the Conqueror." - Hardik_Yadav_41217mthReplied to Vedora_Tempest
Author San I have a idea too I mean you have to twick a little here and there give him wood release. I mean Naruto already has a hand made up of first hokage's cell hand how much of a stretch will it be. but I liked it so far keep up. let's see what you choose here as there are many directions this story can turn to.
2. **Void Sight Eye (Kyometsugan)**: The Kyometsugan allows Nagato to manipulate the concept of space and distance. He can teleport instantly to any location he has seen or marked, making him incredibly elusive and agile in combat. - Hardik_Yadav_41217mthReplied to yoshikage_kira9
I liked it to be honest with you , there are so many options for him to grow his eyes into.
2. **Void Sight Eye (Kyometsugan)**: The Kyometsugan allows Nagato to manipulate the concept of space and distance. He can teleport instantly to any location he has seen or marked, making him incredibly elusive and agile in combat. - Hardik_Yadav_41217mthReplied to
see what can you do is, with his 360 degree sight he can dose anything with ftg. it's already broken as no hyuga have it as they don't prefer ninjutsu and with maturity you can give him more reaction time when he fight issihiki .Or provide him a sage mode or something these dojutsu makes no sense I mean what's the point having a alternative dimensions what he is going to keep there or if you want it so badly later in stage you can make him make a ninjutsu who does that not waste a dojutsu over it
2. **Void Sight Eye (Kyometsugan)**: The Kyometsugan allows Nagato to manipulate the concept of space and distance. He can teleport instantly to any location he has seen or marked, making him incredibly elusive and agile in combat. - Hardik_Yadav_41217mthReplied to Jordan_6286Ch 8 Suggestions? closed. â
- Hardik_Yadav_41217mthReplied to DIMIE_21
yes, I mean what's the point giving a dojutsu who does that
2. **Void Sight Eye (Kyometsugan)**: The Kyometsugan allows Nagato to manipulate the concept of space and distance. He can teleport instantly to any location he has seen or marked, making him incredibly elusive and agile in combat. - Hardik_Yadav_41217mthCommented
well he is coming now , I can see it happening đđ¤Ł
Having the capability to protect myself doesn't mean that I have the ability to defeat it easily. And even if I come across a situation where I have to fight it, I would rather choose to avoid it if possible, knowing that there is probably a 50/50 chance of me winning. Even if I do win, I will be left with several injuries, some of them probably critical. As such, I stealthily left the place to continue exploring other parts of the island. - Hardik_Yadav_41217mthCommented
man if we want to read p*rn we will go on internet. don't make it harem, it's just boring I say we don't need romance at all.
No - Hardik_Yadav_41217mthCommented
is there same company as this world? I don't think so. on another note it's Chinese novel what can we say they can do anything đ¤Ł. still let's see how it goes....
Involving the World Cup and smart investments in companies like Amazon, Apple, and Google, he realized that this life of just making money wasn't what he truly wanted. - Hardik_Yadav_41217mthCommented
same as my thoughts, so much to explore on this dojutsu.
Thought so, access would have to be restricted to anyone other than the Hokage, as the Tenseigan is a dangerous Dojutsu on par with the Rinnegan. - Hardik_Yadav_41218mthReplied to KK9494
- Hardik_Yadav_41218mthReplied to FicFrenzyCh 96 096 Gentle Heart
- Hardik_Yadav_41218mthReplied to Dao_8teh
I agree author-san it's your work give it all , make it a unique one . All the very best!!
This paragraph has been deleted. - Hardik_Yadav_41218mthCommented
I really liked this fic. man don't do it author-san you can make him stronger with each step . I can think now he will punch madara and he will be out cold on dirt , it will ruin it make him suffer make him stronger through his misery , that's what most people admire in Naruto . I hope for future chapters you will make sure to adjust the power levels others wise it will loose it's touch same as there is a fanfic for kuroko basketball, still love your work keep it up author-san
"I am Absolute. Nothing is outside my control! If I say Kuroko will not die then it shall be done." - Hardik_Yadav_41218mthReplied to Unknown_To_All
yeah I mean the only drawback is you making him stronger like in a blink of an eye, you can write it like he heal him only partially so that he can be alive for few days more making your character little bit stronger and make him do the more work on his healing skills in future chapters .
Instantly Akashis hands began to heal Kurokos's injuries with perfect finesse and control. If Tsunade was here watching Akashi's movement she would cough blood in jealousy.