Ray_Trev

Looks like something is brewing [img=gift] The first chapter looks okay to me, but it seems too dark or maybe not?, depends on reader Will add it in my library for now, lets see where it takes me

Awesome man, You got an awesome story there. Just don't loose hope and keep writing 👍 Wish you good luck. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Till now the story is good, and the development is also not too fast and not too slow. The first chapter is about how the mc got the system .[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

It's good but not completely understandable as it's just one chapter. I hope that the author will add more chapters soon so that we readers can easily understand the story. Only one chapter can't give the understanding to the readers [img=update]

The story is good and I like the idea of warewolf. It's overall not a bad story of you neglect the commas and grammatical mistakes. I personally recommend it[img=recommend]

I loved the story, it's great but the update is quite unstable. I hope u update regularly and try not to disappoint ur fans. And by any chance if don't wanna upload regularly then add 5 to 6 chapters together at a time. Rest all is good Keep it up ✌️

Thanks

Thanks sis ☺️

thanks

thanks