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If it were me, I would think the following. Probably the variant met someone at this restaurant and then he killed that person. To erase his tracks, he killed everyone else who saw his face. So we think it's just a massacre, but in fact he only had one person in mind. We should do background checks on all dead bodies to see if we can find anyone who was threatened, had involvement in crimes or other motives.
This work is full of holes. How does he know he's S rank? and the S rank is pretty weak, they can die with bullets and are only able to destroy a bar? If it was in other stories, it would be considered Rank C or B at most. I would only call rank S if an entire city disappeared...
I liked it, the story is slow, but I'm enjoying it. Just missing details and information to help with the imagination. If he enters a place, tell him what it is like, if he meets a person, tell him what he looks like. For example, if he enters a cave, don't just say he entered a cave. Give details! Was the cave dark? did you have moisture? Was it spacious? etc etc
Personagem forte, mas não é invencível. Muito bom isso. Em questão de inteligência, ele é normal ou um pouco acima da média. Não é ingênuo. A história está no começo ainda, mas gostei do que vi. Não é apenas poder muito exagerado. Também tem inteligência, estratégia e batalha em longa escala. Espero que no volume espacial seja ainda melhor com batalhas envolvendo naves como Star Wars ou Duna.