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Aaron_Stone982 days agoReplied to IdontGiveADamOh he did find a girl earlier, but the author simply killed her for shock factor.
- Aaron_Stone982 days agoReplied to Carrottop
Chinese Fanfictions, they all go bad at some point.
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- Aaron_Stone9821 days agoCommented
I know you are trying to make the MC funny, but he just comes off as retarded. Please tone down the cringey stuff a bit. Otherwise this is a very good story.
- Aaron_Stone9821 days agoCommented
The Story is pretty good, the MC needs some character development though. He needs to stop acting so cringey.