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Honestly quite exhausting to read. The story is very inconsistent, sometimes it is a guarded secret that Kushina is the jinchuuriki, sometimes it´s common knowledge. At one point a friend even tells a joke about Kurama BEFORE getting told about his existence a FEW sentences later. Besides that, the plot is quite rough, the characters sometimes handle things way too straightforward - especially Hiruzen who is supposed to be an experienced politician - without actually causing the negative consequences like they should.

Update: Couldn´t wait so I had to follow on patreon😅

nice

lol what, since when was Stranger Things included in this fiction?

I absolutely love this story, the characters have quit a lot of emotional depth, the only thing I dont like is the fact that I have to wait for new chapters 🥺

where is this from?

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Feels like a chapter was skipped (again). The translation quality dropped as well

thx for the chapter