Author, You might wanna change some stuff here, coz this is... well you'll know once you read it again.

Mate, I used to be an author myself, but seriously, the way you were able to make already known facts into a accurately written dialogue with logical backdrop, Hats-off mate. Beautiful chapter

I almost thought the opening dialogue for this chapter would be "Remember, No Russian."

This Review is being written after the release of the 11th chapter. This fanfic is perhaps one of the better multi-fandom fanfics out there. The grammer is simple enough with minimal errors. By far, the only problem I have with this fanfic is that the characters are very shallow. None of the characters including the OC(Silas) have any traits to them that make them unique or any mannerisms. But if you don't overindulge this fact, then this fanfic is a solid read. It is in its earlier stages and I wish for this to be one of the few fanfics which are seen to completion. My best wishes to the Author.

The MC probably should. In a battle, its not the one big muscles would win, its the one you can cut those muscles of along with the bone who would win.

Didn't he complete like the talk and walk before his brother mission?

A veritable plot with a obscenely overpowered, but undiscovered MC. The Author has made a good background for the MC, which is quite realistic although the sister feels like a unwelcome or rather un-needed addition. The usage of only known characters like Yakumo has both pros and cons. The story up until now is a bit of a power speedrun, but a well executed speedrun. A good read overall. Looking forward to more chapters in this novel. And I hope the Author, if he/she reads this, does not take any critisism negatively, and continues to pour his heart into the story.

Well it can be quantified by the E=mc^2. here, E stands for Energy released, m for mass in Kilograms and, c for speed of light. Now we don't know how much more faster Aston is from the speed of light or his weight. But taking the fact that he is close to 7 feet tall and is able to move at this speed with his armor on, which would bring the net weight to somewhere around 120 Kgs. Speed of light is known to be 3 x 10^8 Hence, E = 1.2 x10^2 * (3 x10^8)^2 Therefore, Energy released by movement of an object of weight 120 kgs at the speed of light is 1.7 x 10^19 joules. For retrospect, This amount of energy is a 1000 times stronger than the bomb dropped on Nagasaki and the Tsar bomb.

Need more! Do not stop ma boy!,............

Author, I see you have problems with the 'him/her' pronoun. It may be pretentious of me, but allow me to help you with that. =>Him is used when referring to a male and her used when referring to a female. Take note that, check what the gender of the subject is before the pronoun is, not after. If the sentence is about Sona's sister, then it would "her" sister, as the subject is Sona, as she is a female. If the sentence was Ryo's sister, then it would be "his" sister, as the subject is Ryo, as he is a male. Hope it helps.

you get small hairy pp...why?

*revelation

Author, this is just advice, not for the book, but you, I understand that the book has gained quite some attention but don't feel pressured, put out chapters at your own convinience, and give us some quality chaps, the first chapter does make me await what this fic can become, so know that atleast one of your readers awaits your chapters, whenever they may come.

"A Masterpiece" - Not Michael Bay "A Clinical Study on Art of writing Fanfic" -Not Forbes

I have gone for 104 hours just on a packet of salted nuts and 3 glasses of water, its not that big of a feat.

Shouldn't it increase or decrease? i mean, is the business not working?

clock resets to 00:00, not 24:00, because that would mean the same day's 24th hour is on, but in truth its the start of a new day, so it would be 00:00

Just Imagine if the genders were reversed, it would turn into a horror fic just that fast

how tf did you know the exchange rate?

Thook