WonkierDragon

when does he log out and go in the real world? doesn't he have to eat.

I didn't think i would like this story so much, but i really am looking forward to more chapters.

hard to follow along. story alittle choppy.

she sure is competitive

This was a very nice conclusion to this chapter. I feel like van is a meta too but a non-combatant one, unless he carries automatic laser guns with him and becomes like a meta-technomancer. That would be freaking awesome. Im also curious about Kai and why he is so possessive of Ray and Van.

love this!

chapters start to repeat after 39....Hopefully fixed in coming days? good novel though.

dont like the main character 😒 he is a sleazeball.

The only thing I don't like about this book is repeating story structure, else I love the story line. For example im at the end where each head of race is probably going to be starting for each chapter and basically say the same thing for each chapter. chapter 144 Beast man. thank you Daniel. chapter 145 demon king thank you Daniel. chapter 146 elf nation thank you Daniel. kinda makes me the reader feel like your putting empty chapters out there to get coins. Sometimes your words also repeat in chapters. Kinda boring, pretty much the same repeating words, I scroll on past because it isn't important and not like im missing out on anything. im not telling you this to be mean, I truly want you to grow stronger in your writing. Less repeating stuff and I believe you'd gather followers like flies to honey. If you cut down on the repeating words people would read slower because they wouldn't want to miss important information thusly increasing the likelihood they will stay hooked on your book longer and you'd earn more in the long run.

This story is engaging, I can not put it down. I believe I have spent over 30 dollars. I've been reading it all day. I seriously have no complaints. You are building a masterpiece. I enjoy the main character's mindset. I wouldn't rate him totally a villain because what killer restrains himself for family sake? anyways I'm enjoying it very much...umm, but I'm going to have to stop buying ATM or my husband going to kill me. tehe