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OMG, it's just the opening...
I do really love all the names of characters and the world you made
Thank you for the sharing. Before this, I chopped the paragraph but I find it feels too many ‘enter’. So I put some sentences together. I will try to balance it. As a reader, how much sentences in a paragraph do you feel the most comfortable enough to read? And if you aware, I mostly put direct speech first, then the explanation. Do you find it hard to digest? I love to find a reader that I could talk to, so I can improve my writing. Thanks a lot for your suggestion. I do really appreciate that🥳
Vote, Add to the Library, and Read this novel will make your day! The way the author leads our emotions is pretty good. I'm about badmouthing the man from the first chapter. lol... Having the world designed as the one universe with the first book is a good move. It makes loyal readers try to read both books.
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sometimes, I got a dream in which I was another person.. lol
oohhh it's a mystery about Zendia's past... but seems like Yerre already knew all about Zendia's life... It must be written on the book she had red... lol
this is the new system... I never played any game with karma points counted before, except the game of life... lol
hahaha... I love the way you create the conflict