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A little foreshadowing? Maybe? Please!
I, honestly, didn't know the word, flys, is real! Here it should be flies as most everywhere else! Only use if talking about multiple flys to pants. You know the zippers!
Incredible solo boss fight loved it! And now he has magic! Here I thought he was going to be gifted fire magic from first Wolfman boss fight, and I was a little disappointed when he didn't get it. This was so much better! This is up there with Shadow Slave! They are my one two stories here!
It's a little overly dramatic. Leg and chest wounds are not that near death, right?
I really wish they would equip a shield or even bracers!
Didn't they just threw away their scabbards??
Empty pond is a hole, right?
Ninth? Or eleventh?
Just double them to twenty and see what happens!
bedhead? It might mean headboard! Bedhead means messy hair, so I don't think that's right.
Where they are currently, Ananke could never go! It's hard, but death sometimes doesn't give you a chance to say a proper goodbye!
Charming charm seems boring? A non-charming charm sounds mysterious, thus more exciting.
Puny humans want to have something before the gods when the gods are the primordial beginning. Being immortal doesn't necessarily make one a god.
It's 2.5 or two hours and a half, I assume?
It appears that the author is talking about aiming off from the fish to actually hit it!