I've only just remembered this is a complete copy of an overpowered gamer from fanfiction.net like word for word

Just a copy from fanfiction.net, really don't get why people just copy and paste years old fanfics that weren't made by you, atleast give credit to the original

Another reincarnated person? Why

I'm so confused as to what you're thinking when writing this, he's intentionally hurting his mate, but feels bad and acknowledges that's he's doing it, yet he's supposed to be with leah, at this point come up with some bs way to break the bond without consequences or include her in the relationship

Sooo... she's not gonna drag hiro in and claim him as her darling right?

Hopefully you continue this, not many darling in the franxx ff that are good

So he's gone from wiping the floor with tiamat whos super class with only 80% of his power, to being smacked around by and ultimate class and weaker opponents at full power....

So now he's immortal? Tf is going on here😂

How's he suddenly started caring for others?

Am I the only one who doesn't recognise these names? I swear all of asterisk is japanese.....

Why does it seem like 50% of the text is translated and the rest is typed by an English speaker?

Just do normal kids, ais is emotionless, freya is mental, the others are meh but having normal girls would be a change for ai allowing her to know what actual motherhood is like

So he's got gluttony? Have him consume his wand, or maybe a dragon heart string? He could become super OK but just hold back

I mean it's a slight copy of another shameless ff but it's good, I like the changes so hopefully you don't drop this

Is this just horribly translated?

Being so angry over a fanfic enough to call someone a gay femboy is nuts😂 I mean if u were ghostyz then I wouldn't care but that made me chuckle

The fact you killed the dude instantly annoys me and basically ruins the story for me, I'm sure other will enjoy it though

It's good so far, I'm just hoping it's not gonna take 100 chapters to catch up to the anime like most tensura ff

Please don't make it so he gets forced to join/work for them, that would just be stupid

Whats he doing to kiss her? Licking her lips😂 I'm so weirded out but fascinated at the same time