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"Insane strength, lightning fast reflexes" are some of the things he asked for and yet he barely won against someone a few years older than him

You said the upcoming chapters are going to be upsetting, helaena also has a worry of dying during birth, neither her or the baby are gonna die are they?🤨

So not only did you make him have no improvement after his training, you're tying him to Britain with the logic that he can't ignore the black family summons even AFTER knowing this isn't the same harry potter world he knew about

Apart from the stupid "I didn't even do a full situl up and now i look like a Greek god" bs, how is NO ONE gonna question how he changed so drastically overnight, its like an obese narcissists fantasy, become insanely good looking with no effort and no one questions him

Still going to read it though

Not your typical story, but its a comedic read, one of the few out of the thousands of ff I've read that made me laugh, very good writing and comedic timing

Personally not a fan of cultivation worlds, but I'm enjoying the story so far, I'll just wait until you introduce another world

It's a decent story, good English, slightly confusing name, but the chapters are short, I can't help but think this is a translation done with an actual English speaker correcting the mistakes themselves, also I just read chapter 57 and he's still 5 years old....

Magneto power can destroy planets, Scott shoots lasers from his eyes😂 I feel like you're just making the mc very underpowered for no other reason other than "character development"

Haven't been this interested in a ff in a while, hopefully you don't stop uploading like so many authors recently, webnovel has been quite boring these past few weeks