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HellBoyMC1dReplied to hakansyHave you read the new Ultimate one where he is already married to MJ and gets his power after his marriage? Is it good ? I heard people saying it's good.
"Killing can be heroic too." Peter says with a shrug. "That man ordered what amounts to a terrorist attack on a crowded fair-"- HellBoyMC5dReplied to Calleum_Artori
Yeah I understand, that's why I wanted to show some positive criticism so that you can improve on what I think can be done differently. I mostly don't comment much about criticism as I leave the fanfic which I don't like. But your fanfic is honestly one of the best I read here. And that's why I gave my opinion so that you can improve as you keep on writing. It's been a long time since I read about a mc who isn't a murder hobo or a kind and forgiving good guy (honestly I am also tired of forgiving mc after just finishing Trails of Cold Steel 3). Also one of the reasons why I like your fanfic is cuz you added Rin and like myself you also seems to be a great Fate series and Rin admirer. So cheers to that too and just keep on pumping those chapters.
Ch 35 Rewards and Pylon - HellBoyMC5dCommentedTwo-tailed kitsune my ass, she's just a pervert with a one tail and a butt plug.
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So she didn't summoned 'Actually Satan' yet ?
[TohsakaHeiress]: I'm new here, but I'll leave my well wishes for your recovery too. - HellBoyMC5dReplied to Savoled
No need to be sorry bro. Everyone has different opinion, like I also don't like Obito and how everyone treats him like some broken hero while to me he just seemed like the biggest simp.
[YellowFlash]: I'm glad you've recovered!. I'm new here, invited by Fukasaku-sama, but still, I'll leave my well wishes for your recovery! (Yellow frog wishing happiness emote). - HellBoyMC5dReplied to DaoistUxPrwu
He never get to be a dad though. When Naruto was born he died, when he was bring back with reanimated jutsu there was whole war going on so he had no time to be a dad at that time too. When he get the time to talk to him after the war the jutsu was released so he had not much time at that time too.
[YellowFlash]: I'm glad you've recovered!. I'm new here, invited by Fukasaku-sama, but still, I'll leave my well wishes for your recovery! (Yellow frog wishing happiness emote). - HellBoyMC5dReplied to Miikari000Ch 44 Village Jille (5) (Final)
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Most get power high and become edgy murder hobo but good thing DS is different.
"So... what would happen if someone of that race... somehow appeared in a world where mana... magic... the supernatural was real?" - HellBoyMC5dReplied to ChronoStasis
Who's Klein bro, I only know ballsdeep69
I sighed, leaning back in my chair and checking the time. It was still a long wait for the release of the online game I was anticipating. I had time to kill before I had to leave home and go buy it (unfortunately). - HellBoyMC5dReplied to oofnaut_1
Nah as a member of "Kirito is always right foundation", I am telling you this dude is a menace.
I sighed, leaning back in my chair and checking the time. It was still a long wait for the release of the online game I was anticipating. I had time to kill before I had to leave home and go buy it (unfortunately). - HellBoyMC5dCommented
You shouldn't speak in a neutral tone if you don't want to scare a person who is already scared of you.
"Your name, I asked your name. I'm Devas, after all." I said in a neutral tone, trying not to scare the guy. - HellBoyMC5dCommented
I am sure Nick would know about this.
After all, foreign currency and jewels that appeared out of nowhere, both literally from another world, weren't very well accepted in the economy. - HellBoyMC5dCommented
People who like gender bend are secretly gay.
I had asked why, and he told me he was a big fan of "Naruko" and that it was an honor to know such characters. - HellBoyMC5dCommentedAs arrogant as the lord of the heavens is, he doesn't have the balls to mess with the Big G.
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Zeus -
First: Never take a plane, the king of the gods, or as I like to call him, "Lord-every-hole-is-a-goal." Don't like the sea? Then don't go to the sky; it will go wrong. - HellBoyMC5dReplied to DjabilongBut this... what did it matter then? And if my world was also just a simple story? Narrated by someone? My thoughts were spiraling down a horrible path before my precious little fish pulled me out of this descending spiral.
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I am 23 but last I check I also grew from 6 ft to 6.1 ft
I was 21 years old; it didn't make sense for me to grow; I had stopped growing at 19. - HellBoyMC5dCommented
Emily be like -
Markus nodded in agreement, but before he could even touch any clothes in the bag, Emily seemed to teleport next to him and pushed him out of the way while she grabbed the clothes herself. - HellBoyMC5dCommented
Till now it is a good story but the romance with Saya irked me, it just feels like your average teenage romance with Saya blushing over everything and mc calling her little tiger felt so cringe. And other problem I guess I have is author wasted Saeko potential as a character. Cuz of romance with Saya author didn't use Saeko potential and character well and in the end making her some shadow to Saya which seems forced and wasteful. I think author should focus on Stream and mc interacting with his viewers more and if you want to show romance, make fmc more than just some stereotypical heroine. Honestly the romance with Saya had no depth and feels like it happened just cuz author wanted it (maybe cuz of author love for tsundere which I undestand). Instead DS friendship with both male characters have more depth. That's my criticism till now but still I am enjoying the story.
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