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OakWoodRenewer

OakWoodRenewer

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  • OakWoodRenewer
    OakWoodRenewer2yr
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    nice

    "Master, you have been standing there looking stupid for 4 minutes and 20 seconds," she said back to her usually manner of speaking.
    Celestial Streamer
    Fantasy · Laevateins
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  • OakWoodRenewer
    OakWoodRenewer2yr
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    The book custom warrior is quite a unique one. So far only one chapter is release so I can't comment on stability of updates. The book starts out with a quite generic start (which isn't a bad thing when it comes to reincarnation novels as it is a familiar thing to readers), but two paragraphs later and we get to an almost instant gory scene. The descriptions are done very well and you can easily imagine the scene created by the author. The writing quality is really good, but the only slight problem is that the family members aren't fleshed out so its hard to sympathise or feel too much other than the creepy feeling the well described gory scenes give. And another slight issue is that there is a juxtaposition between the extreme gory scene and the sudden change to a happy go lucky customisation screen, but that may be the authors intention. Overall I believe this book is really promising and I would add this to your collection for when it has been updated enough.

    Custom Warrior
    Fantasy · Fh_Hzl
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  • OakWoodRenewer
    OakWoodRenewer2yr
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    This is an attractive, suspenseful and intense story about a 17 year old boy named Oliver who is suddenly transported to a world portrayed as 'home'; he goes through journeys and adventures challenging his strength and he has encounters with many different characters. Personally, I strongly recommend this read. The author easily juxtaposes characters and encapsulates the relationships between Oliver and the other characters. I really loved the suspense created throughout the story, as well as the fight scenes creating an exciting read. Some things to watch out for are some small grammatical errors however these aren't a major issue. Another thing for the author is to maybe go more into depth with setting description to make it easier for the readers to create a picture of the unique world Oliver was transported to. Other than this, this is an amazing read, and I guarantee an exciting and suspenseful mood and atmosphere! Well done author!

    Celestial Streamer
    Fantasy · Laevateins
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