Swan_Reader

@azzkiba Totally agree with you. I couldn't read after 5th chapter total waste 😞.

This is one of the worst HP/Marvel crossovers I’ve encountered so far. First of all, Doctor Doom is portrayed as foolish, and the riddle offers no value. The weak world-building, along with the lack of any mention of Ron or Hermione, is simply insulting. The author disrespects Doctor Doom’s character and concept in this fanfiction. I do not recommend reading this; I had to wear safety glasses to protect my eyes from the nonsense on this story

First of all, i t's one of the best Dc fanfiction I have read so far. They story ,the characters,and the fights are amazing. But I would like to request the author to make the chapters longer and introduce About Mc's past and The people helping him. it will make the Chapters longers and the story more appealing. GOOD WORK, AUTHOR. KEEP IT UP.

In this Fan Fiction, you write that the Main character is getting powerful as he sleeps. With the Limited brain cells you have, you decided to make the MC a Ninja, in which he has to do a task instead of sleeping and getting stronger. Instead, he has to do a mission. You are just forcing your concept into the story; there is no background or any logic. Total waste of a good concept

the story development and concept is very good it's mind blowing and a very new concept but the growth of the main character is lacking he has the okatsuki bloodline but he act like he is very lonely he has a sharingan but Sims for a girl. we all know the sharing gone he was only after intense hatred but he has The Mangekyō Sharingan but still is simping after a girl. we all know female lead is important but just kind of lead which is just force and misleading is not good for the future development of the novel you should just let it be a revenge arc against the girl family or face slapping. it's a good concept but I am not reading it furt her because is too much of a MC being a SIMP and has to many plot holes

Totally garbage. In the beginning, the author showed MC hothead but after 2 chapters he is simply over-colleens it is just an insult. every wannabe author just tries to force MC into canon like Dog in Heat is really important to MC has to befriend the cast . totally a disappointment for Ikaris

I loved your work Nice character design. I think you should increase the word count of each chapter. update more, good read so far. More chapters needed

I think the author is super dumb. super op MC = super dumb intelligence. the guy created advanced AI and built a phantom drive but doesn't have some backbone. I don't have actual reasoning behind this kind of author with good boy type MC always wiggling their tail for good deeds. total disappointment don't read it time waste

what a waste .mc has a powerful system that recruits powerful wizards but still little whip in front of Dumbledore some Chinese logic shitty work. destroyer of eyes don't read this garbage

one of the best boys' fic It has so much potential. update more and increase the word limit. love the work. good work so far waiting for the new chapters. good luck