Swan_Reader

MTL CHINESE SHIT DROPPED AFTER 1 CHAPTER

This story is an absolute abomination. It should have never been posted anywhere, let alone on this app. After suffering through it, I feel like I need to scrub my eyes clean. The writing is filled with nothing but empty drivel — there's zero character development, no coherent world-building, and the plot is a complete dumpster fire. It's a disgrace to storytelling. Save yourself the pain; this trash isn't worth a second of your time. Beware: most of the positive reviews are clearly fake. Would you like a few more variations depending on the tone you want (like more sarcastic, more brutal, or a bit more professional)?

To overpowered. There is no scope of world building or character development. It's just system spoon feeding powers to the MC. To short word limit we have to combine this works 3 chapters to make an average 1 chapter. Dropped after 5 chapters. TOTALLY DISAPPOINTED 😞

First, increase the chapter word limit and upload more, or update consistently or on a single day weekly. This has the potential to be more than some nameless fanfiction.

facing the same problem story might be good but I have to drop at chapter 4 because I can't understand the cultivation realms , items grade etc at all it's Chinese. you can try translating better or just delete it

totally agree with you dropped after 5 chapters total waste 😞.

@azzkiba Totally agree with you. I couldn't read after 5th chapter total waste 😞.

This is one of the worst HP/Marvel crossovers I’ve encountered so far. First of all, Doctor Doom is portrayed as foolish, and the riddle offers no value. The weak world-building, along with the lack of any mention of Ron or Hermione, is simply insulting. The author disrespects Doctor Doom’s character and concept in this fanfiction. I do not recommend reading this; I had to wear safety glasses to protect my eyes from the nonsense on this story

First of all, i t's one of the best Dc fanfiction I have read so far. They story ,the characters,and the fights are amazing. But I would like to request the author to make the chapters longer and introduce About Mc's past and The people helping him. it will make the Chapters longers and the story more appealing. GOOD WORK, AUTHOR. KEEP IT UP.

In this Fan Fiction, you write that the Main character is getting powerful as he sleeps. With the Limited brain cells you have, you decided to make the MC a Ninja, in which he has to do a task instead of sleeping and getting stronger. Instead, he has to do a mission. You are just forcing your concept into the story; there is no background or any logic. Total waste of a good concept