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Chill_Man1yrReplied to Darth10oooobro read the synopsis
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well I don't mind the op MC. I am up for some face slapping in the multiverse too. I enjoy the lemons you write too. but I also won't mind if this is dropped. just... don't delete the existing chapters. also I haven't seen a Ben 10 fanfiction in a while. infact any old cartoons being overpowered in another world is ok.
Ch 24 Should I continue? - Chill_Man1yrCommented
bro listen to me! LISTEN TO ME! do not mess this up ok! I don't care if you want harem or not, if you want to take the story in whatever direction you want! This is you story and you have the right to write it however you want! BUT PLEASE DON'T DROP THIS FOR THE LOVE OF GOD!
Ch 1 Wishes - Chill_Man1yrPosted
alright I am going to get something off my chest today. specifically something about the personallity and behaviour of Peter Parker the MC. at first it was quite fine he acted normally. then, I don't know what went wrong, he started acting in...frankly quite an unsettling manner. I know you are trying to portray a carefree op protagonist, one made such because of his immortality and superpowers, but it became quite creepy for me. the way you wrote how he randomly laughs out loud, giggles weirdly, how he walks with a skip. it's like you are writing a weird joker-spiderman character origin. I don't know if I am imagining too much but it's what I think. overall great story though
- Chill_Man1yrCommented
huh kind of a weird interpretation of the character of Naruto but sure you do you I guess.
"Not him, he may be strong but his worldview is not suitable for the things we deal with. For him the world is simply black and white, where there is little black and the 'talk no jutsu deals with everything'. This won't work in other worlds, and we can't afford to have an idealist who can put the quests in jeopardy. He is an emotionally driven fool who does not use his head and that's, even more, a reason that he can't be invited." Aster explained. - Chill_Man2yrCommented
i love this story I absolutely do. but one thing always bothers me. doesn't Ryuu's world have same pop culture and media as us? your telling me out of the probably hundreds of people Ryuu has used powers in front of. no one was like, "are...are you referencing war hammer?"
Ch 156 Chapter 147 - Crusade part 1 - Chill_Man2yrReplied to Man_of_culture_69Ch 1 Chapter 1
- Chill_Man2yrReplied to UnpopularOpinion
of course my man. I am trying to make him as powerful as possible to make sure if he ever went to other fanfics he will be stronger than the Rob of that fanfic.
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in many versions of Greek mythology it is said how the gods grew up extremely fast and that was one of the reasons why feeding Kronos stone instead of the child was extremely easy as Kronos was in constant pain with full grown gods in his stomach. but according to the percy Jackson wiki in the Percy Jackson universe the gods grew at a normal pace as mentioned in one of the lines in the wiki how rhea had raised him in secret and he was made known of his heritage when he was a full grown adult. I decided to change things up obviously
And Gojo is standing standing behind him with a bloody hands holding a cut off Kronos's stomach. It was moving with the children still inside. He cut the stomach open and saw the children inside crying. They were children with barely developing consciousness. Sure they would learn everything as they are god but. They would live most of their lives in darkness. - Chill_Man2yrCommented
took these couple of paragraphs from the wiki
As time passed Kronos grew more sadistic and cold. Loving his power and throne more than his own family. He took his sister rhea as his queen and when their first child was born, he quickly ate their first born daughter. Despite his wife Rhea's begging. - Chill_Man2yrCommented
didn't really think the canon art for Percy Jackson rhea was suitable for a Gojo's girlfriend so I chose this pic. (credit goes to the creator) I thought of putting fire emblem rhea but thought against it as canon Percy Jackson rhea was written to have black hair. also important note I haven't read a single Percy Jackson book myself only fanfictions
They didn't know how true that was for she was a literal goddess! Yes that was right she was Goddess Rhea the titaness of fertility, motherhood, comfort and ease. She was also the mother of the big three of the Olympian gods and the daughter visiting her was her eldest daughter Hestia. - Chill_Man2yrCommentedThey didn't know how true that was for she was a literal goddess! Yes that was right she was Goddess Rhea the titaness of fertility, motherhood, comfort and ease. She was also the mother of the big three of the Olympian gods and the daughter visiting her was her eldest daughter Hestia.
- Chill_Man2yrCommented
canon Percy Jackson art for rhea is not suitable for a main girl so I found this one. I would have chosen the looks of rhea from fire emblem but thought nah.
They didn't know how true that was for she was a literal goddess! Yes that was right she was Goddess Rhea the titaness of fertility, motherhood, comfort and ease. She was also the mother of the big three of the Olympian gods and the daughter visiting her was her eldest daughter Hestia. - Chill_Man2yrReplied to Metalloid
well I am new to twilight fanfictions but every single one I read had Alice as the mc's girlfriend
This paragraph has been deleted. - Chill_Man2yrReplied to 2Zed9
oh sorry it was a typo
She didn't even realized she was blushing until Caleb turned towards her and smirked a little. She immediately turned the other way. I mean what can she even do she was still not fully matured according to angel standard and this was like his 3rd job only so she wasn't that experienced. The previous two reincarnaters were girls so she didn't have this problem before. - Chill_Man2yrCommentedAnd there is Xie Yan. The world travelling cultivator from "I am an evil god". He landed here in an accident since I allow non hostile people to come in this dimension. I guess his system thought it's host could benefit here.
- Chill_Man2yrCommentedThey both hear a feminine voice. "Hey Gojo-kun and Jinwoo-san! Come here and watch! Saturo-kun is being absolutely destroyed at super smash Bros by Xie Yan san!"
- Chill_Man2yrReplied to Chill_ManThat's right the person was Sung Jin woo, the Shadow monarch. He was currently in his true form that was a full long haired adult tied up to a ponytail but he uses a teen form in his world. He has just started dating Cha hae a few months ago and things were going quite well.