EdgeLord_23

I actually just wanted to ask a question. Was it necessary for Luffy to have a scar, or is it just because you like how it looks and know that Akainu won't be able to do it again. And why would Luffy and the crew be small aylt their death when he has a grand fleet? Why not emphasize that there weren't enough strong guys. Even if Luffy only had his memories till that point, shouldn't that be enough? He can train haki and devil fruit better with his experience gained, and he doesn't have to hide strength from others cause he trained it. That's actually a lot off questions😅. I actually enjoy this read so much so don't let my questions fool you. I love how the author made changes but kept the originality of the characters, building on what we know of certain characters and building a personality and goals <new crew members>. Thanks and continue doing great work.

Author writing double entendres. he is Michael two, but he is Michael too

Author here don't be shy on the reviews and hope we enjoy this story.

desciples*

isn't it supposed to be MJ

It's a nice read and has a lot of potential. Mc develops a lot of bad qualities like thinking of people as friends but not putting in the effort to develop that friendship (Always looking out for what he can get). Let's say for instance trying to give skills that's useless to him to his friends. And Mc should also try and stick to a legend path. Throwing Fireballs as a son of poseidon, feels weird. By developing a legend as Son of poseidon, I mean focus of water abilities and sword techniques, develop relationships with others that have connection with sea. Use darkness magic to enhance water attacks. Let the legend develop as a story like. after Percy conquered the underworld he developed an affinity for darkness magic. I know I am probably not making sense. It just feels like there is no direction for character development and there is no hope for side characters to get abilities eventhough they are supposedly the mc best friends. And it can't boil down to Luke because he was a red flag friend from Start with everything read by mc in his status. ps. I enjoyed the story up until after fight with Elsa.

Thanks for the chapter. I love the development for Harry. Just when I thought it couldn't get better you prove me wrong⭐️

Great idea/picture you are trying to build. I love the characters and the powers they are getting, and thinking of what characters would do with their abilities is exciting. But this story loses when it comes to development, everything seems rushed. And loses a lot of the tension in characters developing an ability slowly and starting of mid and getting better as the story develops. I have a lot of hope for this fanfic and that it would be great if author decides to further expand it. So far enjoying the creativity, thanks👌