ReimAscart

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I follow the line of thinking of the guy above, pleasing everyone is impossible. Therefore, do your work with complete confidence to your liking and if there are good ideas in the comments, take them into account. And the most important thing is not to get carried away by comments from irrelevant people who criticize even the air you breathe, another thing, good luck if you want to continue writing this fanfic.

I'll be honest, you're on the right track, but a basic fact, the society of souls 2000 years before was already divided, if all souls still coexist, it means that it is thousands of years ago, why? Well, at that time, Squad 0 already existed and the 5 families were completely dominant and of course the Yamamoto school at that time was prominent.

Buen comienzo, una historia que promete y tiene buen desarrollo , no dejes caer esta historia/ ya el mc fue a buscar a su elfa rubia jajaja

what a great chapter!!! You literally took her out of the stadium, well now due to HARU's behavior he has developed emotions, that is, is it possible that they have a relationship somewhat similar to the protagonist of Gumdam the Witch of Mercury, a relationship like Sulleta and Ariel? Keep up the good work you have my support

Thanks for the chapter, a suggestion for the new worlds to go to for me, a good one would be Record Of Ragnarok, you know if, due to the apparent disadvantage of humanity, they would summon a human from another world who turns out to be a god-killer, it would be something interesting

Thanks for the chapter, keep up the good work, it's a good Facfic, I guess the Kleins will be part of the organization in the future? , and it is possible for someone who travels through time with so many GN particles to become an innovator, right?

Gracias por el capítulo

little by little he becomes a servant of the ruling class

Yes