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It would be ironic if the seemingly ordinary soul is actually her Odr, that her pride in seeing mortal souls is actually what made her blind to finding the Odr she so yearns for/an infant dragon, hehe, the dragon slayer, huh/keep cooking, this fanfic is already in the ranking. Thanks for the chapter.

Black Team, Thanks for the episode/Keep cooking!

Well, our budding Champion has already started walking. Eina is going to have a heart attack if the MC arrives at the guild in his current appearance, haha. And considering the fact that the MC will apparently have an enlightenment from what he mentioned, or he's simply become a battle maniac in this chapter. Thanks for the chapter, keep cooking.

He will be an ally. The MC is emotionally mature to a certain extent, so I feel like he'll see him more as a rival. / Well, an intrusive thought, Artemis, waifu? / The MC needs a growth ability, so I see him as he won't be a hero (heroes are always the ones who suffer in the end, generally). I see the MC more as a Champion. If the world threatens everything important to the MC, he would face the world if necessary. This is what I see in the MC's desire to be strong. Thanks for the chapter.

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I follow the line of thinking of the guy above, pleasing everyone is impossible. Therefore, do your work with complete confidence to your liking and if there are good ideas in the comments, take them into account. And the most important thing is not to get carried away by comments from irrelevant people who criticize even the air you breathe, another thing, good luck if you want to continue writing this fanfic.

I'll be honest, you're on the right track, but a basic fact, the society of souls 2000 years before was already divided, if all souls still coexist, it means that it is thousands of years ago, why? Well, at that time, Squad 0 already existed and the 5 families were completely dominant and of course the Yamamoto school at that time was prominent.

Buen comienzo, una historia que promete y tiene buen desarrollo , no dejes caer esta historia/ ya el mc fue a buscar a su elfa rubia jajaja

what a great chapter!!! You literally took her out of the stadium, well now due to HARU's behavior he has developed emotions, that is, is it possible that they have a relationship somewhat similar to the protagonist of Gumdam the Witch of Mercury, a relationship like Sulleta and Ariel? Keep up the good work you have my support

Thanks for the chapter, a suggestion for the new worlds to go to for me, a good one would be Record Of Ragnarok, you know if, due to the apparent disadvantage of humanity, they would summon a human from another world who turns out to be a god-killer, it would be something interesting