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😂😂😂
So Alex needs her to fail being an obedient concubine to not make her a wife. This is a great opportunity to issue her a warning. 2 more warnings and the deal is canceled. Later on just create situations where those warnings are inevitable and the situation is resolved!
Hahaha, bro does damage control😂
These pendulum swings in writing is sorta strange. As though someone has menstruation cycles😂😂😂 I see absolutely no sense in making the previous battle any relative if everything would end this easy…
How on earth did the soldiers then hear the dying curses of that noble in the center of the army?! Right?! So it means all this battle was based on bull**it excuse to not let the center fall quickly and have Alex secure an easy win…😩
Same here. I have no idea why the author destroys his own novel with such forced and unnatural scenarios. And most important is that all that MC has done yields 0 returns: better quality iron weapons - nothing changes, chainmail - nothing changes, revolutionary cavalery - nothing changes, modernized system of command - nothing changes, regular army troops with constant training - nothing changes…
What victories?! He almost died countless times without any reason. A sane man would be extremely cautious afterwards. This is plain nerfing the MC for the tenth time already.
I hate this the most about this novel. Alex has absolute advantage in almost every battle and yet he wins only because of some miracle… there are countless things his troops are better at and for this author that’s still not enough! It always gives me masochist vibes if I see people enjoy such writing style…
PLEASE don’t make MC try to change her and make waifu material!!! He better find himself a normal girlfriend later on rather than suffer with this awkward fish!
The best death to die
Why if he does cardio first thing in the morning? When I go to the gym early I don’t shower as well, since it’s useless cuz you get sweaty in 5 mins
Well, cow’s a grown up after 2 years technically…
If you blame everything on fiction as you say, then the novel is obviously trash. And that is literally the reason I dropped it long ago
Bad writing here. It’s the first scene in the novel that is boring to read!
Bruh, why do everybody go with the misconception of archers=agility?! Archers were the most physically developed warriors throughout the history! It’s extremely hard to keep pulling the string for hours on end during a battle! On the contrary, a soldier type of warrior has to be sturdy and agile to hide behind a shield and use a spear/sword while cowering.
Man, this is simply copy-pasting. At least make them independent beings for some original story-development. For example: he has to leave this snake in the forest cuz he can’t take it to any settlement. But later on he absorbs/combines the snake with a mimic so it can take human form.