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Honestly I feel like people nowadays are fine with just any mediocre work This story is terrible, nothing properly connects, we are just thrown from one scene to another without any explanation and when writing these scenes it feels like he forgets all that he wrote in the past and just inputs new things without using common sense, frankly I think it's pathetic that I see only 5 star reviews.
isn't spiel German? so it's probably something German and spiel means write I think ur probably wrong either eay
please change it to magician it's illogical to call it magecian, I really hope you look at comments
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nah easily god tier lad
urgent? the dude has a few billions with all that gold if not a few hundred million, you do realize that you need to read the chapter and think with a human brain not an ant one to have the capacity to comment like you aren't an absolute imbecile
faster than Usain bolt, and he ran that entire distance, meaning his stamina is top notch and he could probably go even faster
Well this is a great novel, very well thought out except the background characters don't react like normal people whatsoever, like I understand people like making rumors and exaggerating them but this is just too much, and the system although annoying is not too bad but I did not like it when he tried to cuck the mc, even if it is with a goal it doesn't really make sense since the system did try and get the girl to like him in the first place
This is stupid, what about idiotic people like me that rely on sounds to hear cars that don't check the road with their eyes all the time
in the paragraph you commented on, only one asterisk was used at the start and end, so he did think it and didn't say it out loud, as for open inventory he was instructed to do so, besides he is in his room
Well, this makes absolutely no sense, 2 chapters in and the author replies to a comment which makes sense, and counteracts it, then a few paragraphs later, it says the opposite of what the author said, I was like ok fine moving on, and then he says he is like an mc who has no memory in a new body, even though he has a memory and was literally trained by 5 goddesses for a very long time, but now he Also forgers the basics, nah this is shit idk what the other reviewers saw in this junk
thanks buddy I changed it