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Trying to write a fic, hope it works out. Critiques are kindly welcomed. Thanks
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Still a 2.5 wow. Was my first try on a fanfiction so I won't complain 🤷🏻♂️ And yeah now that I look back at it the starting was pretty cliche. Though I had planned for a way different plot than others but I've already maybe given up on this one. Though I don't remember complaining about cliches that much? Was it in the fanfiction where I complained or did you find it from somewhere else? xD
Hmm? Did I not answer this? Where'd my reply go? Did webnovel delete it? I'll just answer again. From Momo's point of view, Whatever the league of villains wanted was unsuccessful so it was obvious they would attack again. Now for her preparing? She never stated that she wouldn't be prepared or anything but she lacked info. When would they attack? Where would they attack? How many villains would attack? Too much lack of info for her to properly prepare a counter-attack. All she can do is get as strong as she could (I've also prepared to show how she's preparing in the future chapters a bit.) Hope this helps. You can ask anything that's left unsolved for you btw. (Glad I decided to check through the paragraph comments again.)
Eh, Seiya? Nobody ever used his appearance in my experience. High-quality work though keep it up.
BRUH
like the other said fanfiction.net
urgh Good people would destroy the main cast there for the good of humanity.
I personally would love to try making her become a villain so yes.
eh tbh i was going to murder the dad regardless if it was win*est or not ;-;. jokes aside. The parents would well get irrelevant in the long run and someone who finally found a families love would realistically love staying with them then do stupid missions. My personal opinion ;)
make hope pregnant and get a new worthy hope hmmmmm
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