Jamarion_Rich

The story is good, but the characters, all of them are really hypocritical. their is no real consequence for going against what they believe in, for example Buddhist commit murder constantly, will say one thing then contradict themselves the next. the Mc for all his actions to achieve freedom, is still bound by things like love, his mind was still changed by the world, its not something he allowed its something that was forced him.

The story isn't bad, but it also isn't good. The concept is excellent but the execution is lackluster. I don't believe the author did enough research into Shirou and his power, and the MC just gives out information freely without considering anything. The author tries to make it seem like he is gathering information by giving out information, but once again the execution is very poor. If you are bored and have nothing else to read you can give it a try, but as for paying, by patron, for more chapters I personally won't do it. but once again the concept is good.

I honestly don't know where these 5-star reviews are coming from, the novel isn't terrible but it also isn't good. The novel is just wish fulfillment, as most novels on this website are. There is no real plot, development, or theme. The Mc has no real personality, I mean she was a normal person from our world before, then she got the Wanda template, and she had no problem with killing people. So if you are bored, I guess you can give it a try.

All you had to do was mind control them. And all of a sudden she has no problem with killing, I mean Wanda herself doesn’t kill unless she absolutely needs to or she is having a meltdown.

Honestly, the story isn't bad, it's also not good. If you are bored and don't have anything to do, it can be a decent read. But because the way his ultimate skill seems to be set up, and because it's only 22 chapters in, it just seems like his ultimate skill is just the author giving him whatever he wants, which is kind of like how it is in Re: Zero. But that makes for an uninteresting story, and I don't believe the author did any real deep research into tensura, just surface-level stuff. But depending on how future chapters are, I may update my rating. And just a quick side note for Arthur, if you want to add some restrictions to the MC, so he doesn't just beat everyone, because well you want him to, sense the source of his power is a ultimate skill, when he goes against other ultimate skill users they can hard counter him, based off the fact that they are ultimate skill users, the same with those with administrative authority, ultimate level magic, god grade equipment, or divinity (true heros etc). And, so a battle between him and other ultimate skill users, will depend on the ultimate skill, but more so on will and existence value. And if his ultimate skill serves as a connection, there are plenty of top tiers capable of restricting or isolating him from that connection, with things like ultimate tier space-time manipulation. If you don't fully understand what I am saying, just search it on the wiki.

Despite my low ranking of this novel, it isn't bad, if you turn your brain off. But, honestly, this story isn't good, it's just wish fulfillment. Your typical Chinese novel, everything about it screams lazy writing, and poor research. The plot is also very forced and manipulated, it has no natural flow. Everything just aligns with the MC, the MC has no struggles, no character development, no real personality, and no depth. Think of him as a blank piece of paper, there but bland. If you have literally nothing better to read and are willing to turn your brain off, it's not bad, for your average Chinese fanfic on this app.

That's the problem, they wouldn't be able to kill him and he also knows this. So yes he is a villain, he has done nothing heroic. Everything he has done has been for personal gain, so the author needs to add the villain tag and save some people the time.

Most gods in LOTM especially outer ones are outerversal due to their authority and symbolism, which are essentially platonic concepts from the astral plane. So basically their hax gets them to outer, this doesn't mean you would see them destroying universes, but they could easily deal with someone capable of destroying universes. As they battle on a deeper level of reality, with symbolism.

Honestly, I had to stop early on because I can suspend my belief in a lot of things. But something as massive as Gilgamesh killing Poseidon I just can't. Dc Poseidon is stronger than even the gods in the fate verse, since he is from the sphere of the gods, which automatically makes him higher dimensional, and even though that was just one of the infinite avatars of possidon in each universe, I can have to suspend belief, because in like 4 chapters from the start the mc is already killing gods in dc.

I really like the story, please keep it up, and I have a question for the author, I really want to know, are you going to introduce some of the true heavy hitters in dc, like beings who can rival or even surpass ash, such as Lucifer and death of the endless. Because i truly believe Ash and Lucifer can be the best of friends