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Dark_demise

Dark_demise

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2021-06-01 JoinedGlobal
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  • Dark_demise
    Dark_demise17d
    Posted

    I love these kind of stories, goody two shoes heroes are so boring. This is the equivalent of hitting the G spot, really liked it. 10/10, would recommend for sure.

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    Anti Hero with a Symbiote System
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  • Dark_demise
    Dark_demise22d
    Posted

    Fell in love with the book from the summary only, the plot is amazing, it still might be too early to tell as not a lot of chapters have been updated but I am willing to take a risk, if you like the royalty genre this book is probably for you. And I think the summary can explain this novel better then I will ever be able to.

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    His Dark Desire: Tales of a Yandere
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  • Dark_demise
    Dark_demise29d
    Commented

    prepare for trouble, and make it double -team rocket maybe

    [Achievement: Double Trouble. See two pairs of chest at the same time. +100 Experience, + 1 Perception]
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    Leveling through Lust
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  • Dark_demise
    Dark_demise1mth
    Posted

    An OP mc who can beat Royal guards bare handed 馃槀馃槀馃槀, waiting to see what else can he do other then stopping stones mid air. And we already have a cute waifu 馃槀馃槀馃槀.

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    DAMIEN.
    Fantasy RomanceAngelLily
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  • Dark_demise
    Dark_demise1mth
    Posted

    I usually only read books with a lot of action, fights and kame hame ha's, and I thought this one was also about that, but it caught me by surprise 馃槀馃槀馃槀, the book is good and I liked it. Waiting for more chapters, gimme more.

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    Break An Alpha鈥檚 Heart
    Fantasy RomanceAngelLily
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  • Dark_demise
    Dark_demise1mth
    Posted

    I Like the premise, waiting for more chapters to be released. If you are here, thinking whether or not to read it, it is at the very least worth a try. Will keep coming back for more.

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    Boundary of the Reaper King
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  • Dark_demise
    Dark_demise1mth
    Posted

    I really like the premise, I like different spins on myths and legends, and Fenrir is one of my all time favorites from Norse myth, T_T my hopes are very high.

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    The Atrocious Werewolf Prince
    FantasyThe_Novel_Man
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  • Dark_demise
    Dark_demise3mth
    Posted

    Loved the story. Everything happening in the mc's life was explained beautifully. I just loved listing to mc's thoughts all the time lol but overall this story has a lot of potential and it is going in the right direction.

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    DeleTEd
    Fantasy Romancezushe_sensei
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  • Dark_demise
    Dark_demise9mth
    Commented

    Maybe add a comma in the last line,

    Below the tree, sat a boy around the age of twelve, watching the river flow with a deep thought. He got up and went towards the river edge. He bent down and saw his reflection. His little dark brown hair came in front of his magnetic black eyes blocking his view. He ran his fingers through his front hair to set them as wind disheveled them making them fall back in front of his eyes again.
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    TRUTH OF CHAOTIC PAST
    FantasyCREATIVE_SPACE
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  • Dark_demise
    Dark_demise10mth
    Commented

    Point of view switch is very sudden, just mention who is talkning before changing point of view

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    Lord Qui, I'm Nothing But a Mere Mortal
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  • Dark_demise
    Dark_demise10mth
    Posted

    From the style to its structure, this novel is superb. It has the grammatical format that is just my spot of tea! The storyline flows from one chapter to another to create a holistic and cohesive plot that almost drives itself

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    Benevolent Demon : Hiatus!
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  • Dark_demise
    Dark_demise10mth
    Commented

    Too many ands lol

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    Benevolent Demon : Hiatus!
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  • Dark_demise
    Dark_demise10mth
    Replied to Levi_owo
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    Demon King System
    FantasyDark_demise
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  • Dark_demise
    Dark_demise10mth
    Replied to KaGen

    Your novel is amazing too, Thank you for taking out some time out of your schedule to read my work.

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    Demon King System
    FantasyDark_demise
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  • Dark_demise
    Dark_demise10mth
    Replied to BrewingFantasies
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    Demon King System
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  • Dark_demise
    Dark_demise10mth
    Posted

    The first chapter was amazing, I had a different image of MC and the image changed as I kept reading through the chapter. I really like this type of writing, The chapter made me ask questions and I want to find answers. First chapter was enough to convince me that the story has potentials

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    Last Man Alive
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  • Dark_demise
    Dark_demise10mth
    Posted

    I liked the novel first chapter had a good hook. Keep writing and improving good luck...................................................................

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    Order Killer
    Martial ArtsKaGen
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  • Dark_demise
    Dark_demise10mth
    Commented

    had

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    Demon King System
    FantasyDark_demise
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  • Dark_demise
    Dark_demise10mth
    Commented

    add his father here

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    Demon King System
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  • Dark_demise
    Dark_demise10mth
    Commented

    temple is singular

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    Demon King System
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