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I liked the novel, you can tell the author is experienced, not doing the beginner mistakes. As the story is in very early stages, I can only comment on the plot, which is very nice, both characters are well thought of, with strong personalities. The thing I am most excited to find out is who will fall in love first. I am looking forward to get my answer.
Fell in love with the book from the summary only, the plot is amazing, it still might be too early to tell as not a lot of chapters have been updated but I am willing to take a risk, if you like the royalty genre this book is probably for you. And I think the summary can explain this novel better then I will ever be able to.
prepare for trouble, and make it double -team rocket maybe
I usually only read books with a lot of action, fights and kame hame ha's, and I thought this one was also about that, but it caught me by surprise 😂😂😂, the book is good and I liked it. Waiting for more chapters, gimme more.
Loved the story. Everything happening in the mc's life was explained beautifully. I just loved listing to mc's thoughts all the time lol but overall this story has a lot of potential and it is going in the right direction.
Maybe add a comma in the last line,
Point of view switch is very sudden, just mention who is talkning before changing point of view
Too many ands lol
had
add his father here