this book needs some strong editing but the story itself is great and shows great promise. good luck author.

I think in this apocalyptic world has a lot of potential but the writer to seems to be lacking in words and grammatical skills. also I noticed it's a bit lacking on the descriptive side and the actions are some what exaggerated. ...see what I did there? the writer does a lot of repeats of words too. Author seems to also be lacking in knowledge when it comes to the fighting, school violence and bullying, what students should do and what they should not do, authorities, pain, injuries... housings... editing should be swift and precise asap for the story itself is intriguing.

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eh?

boom

this starts of lonely but I can tell the novelist is going to open up big. I like stories that start slow. good read so far. I'll check out the other books.

hmm.... reminds me of 'beth' ...the guy from "Good girls'' 💛