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..............................................when will u update it🙄🙄🙄🙄
amazing write ups , mostly language improvement focused but each and every part of the chapters is so good to read when ever i read it i feel all this happening in front of me ......
All of your working performance is good and it is so easy for us to understand and read this novel becoz of it easy language .......................................its really so nice m waiting for next part of it ....❤❤❤❤
Character designing is good as well as story basic .....................................................
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All over your imazination skills are good but daily freshing also important .............................................................
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Dheer and Veer relation i like most ,i read all over the chapter but i'm not able to find conmection b/w dheer and veer i don't know what's relation but they are with each other i feel like my close frnd with me....
Every part of the story is so nice...............................................
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Priyanshi and shiva first meeting was amazing its like unexpected love we lost hope to get love but at the end ojr love find out us.......amazing di keep it up
Everything is amazing specially dheer when he was lost in other world and after some time he realised that he was in the same place👏👏👏👏👏👏[img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]