The quality of writing and the exposition for the background and characters are lovely written and detailed. I look forward to reading more!

The story plot and the world background is interesting! There are grammar issues but a bit of editing will solve that. My major issue is used of --- instead of "" for speaking. I know you put a description in an earlier chapter but the dash lines dont really read well, especially when there are two characters speaking in my opinion. This is more personal preference since I'm used to see " used for character dialogue as well. Other people might be fine with it so choose whichever works best for you. Beyond that the story is growing and has good potential! Keep up the great work!

The story building for this world and the description of the characters are really well done! My one tip for this novel is that you space out your paragraphs more. Break up some information to build up a sense of suspense for the next line. Other than that your story is really well done and immersive! Added it to my library and keep up the good work!

Wow, KDJ really did that.

Another shameless author review. This novel is extremely different from my others. It plays heavily on the idea of good and evil. The main character will struggle with keeping his mortality in a wildly immoral city. Who truly deserves to be punished? Are there truly no such things justice in the city of Briagas? Get lost in this story and enjoy the whirlwind of events!

Hello everyone! Author here with a review for TOTGDK. This novel was originally my first and ment to one of my longest ones. This will have many twists and turns, betrayals and heartbreak. There will be many characters to enjoy, love, hate, etc. This novel will probably have about 3 to 4 volumes so look forward to that! I hope you all enjoy this epic tale!

I've been seeing other authors do this and decided to do a updated review for my novel. Prince of Food is a fun, more down to earth novel of mine. There will be laughs, love and crazy situations all around. The main characters will slowly come together, and grow together as well. Hope you all enjoy this novel, happy reading!