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Hey, this was a really nice read! Honestly, good DD2 fanfics are pretty rare, so stumbling across one that’s written with clear grammar and some natural character interactions feels like a gem. I’m curious to see where you’ll take the story next. The characters already feel more alive than I usually expect in this fandom filled translations. Of course, totally fine if it takes time, but I do hope you’ll update at some point—it’d be great to see how things develop. Either way, great job so far. Keep it up!

when are you gonna update? been pretty hype to be honest

wow, good job on your first fanfic. i thought it is a translation but turns out you have the courage to make an original. as a beginner writer, the quality is already good. keep up the good workkkk

Congratulations on your first fanfic! Wishing you the best of luck and the passion to keep writing. Some comments might feel tough, but see them as steps to grow—your work already shows promise. Well done, and keep it up! I’m excited to read the next chapter.