The plot is great all around, far better then my moronic novel. The only problem is the spelling mistakes that should not exist at all. Btw, advice from a fellow author. I suggest you begin releasing 3 chapters a day each 4 hours apart. That's how you draw readers. That's how I got about 2k readers in only 2 days. Lots of people love to check the update section of a genre.
Yep, way to many spelling mistakes. Some people are easily turned off by spelling mistakes no matter how good the novel is. My novel has lots of spelling mistakes too but not wjem it comes to basic grammar. Anyway I like the plot of your novel so far.
I'm back, been refining my craft to see what works and what does not. The new name now is The King of Gangsters. Drop by and check it out because I'll be releasing 3 chapters a day.