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DeadBeatWeeb24dCommentedI suppose I ought to add it it.
"Humu."- DeadBeatWeeb3mthReplied to Holy_Llama
He definitely just popped into my head, even though he’s the grandfather.
"You aren't dead yet, you punk? You really scared your father!" - DeadBeatWeeb3mthPosted
I read all of this not too long ago. I don’t usually do reviews, but with the way these reviews are so scewed I thought I should. It’s extremely repetitive. It’s one thing to have a fairly consistent structure to arcs, but the beats should change up to keep things engaging. It rarely does so. I wouldn’t go so far as to call this trash-I found the romance cute enough-but it should only really be read if you’ve got quite literally nothing else to read (in which case, I could recommend something). But if you want to give it a shot, I say read two or three arcs and see how you feel. Because the only thing that’ll really be changing is the scope of conflict.
- DeadBeatWeeb3mthReplied to LordKazuma
This isn’t verbatim, but it’s close.
"You see, a thousand years ago... - DeadBeatWeeb5mthReplied to DaoisttAYuDl
What a childish response to a perfectly reasonable question. But don’t worry, I have long since quit this horrendous fanfic.
From that, he realized that the man who just talked about killing the kids was the same man who glared at Yami's bat. Yami also found out that this man was exiled from the hidden stone village and had also lost an ear to hidden leaf shinobis. Yami continued to listen to the conversation for a few more minutes. At first most of them were giving reasons like - DeadBeatWeeb5mthReplied to DaoistrGe4tJ
They’re the ones that decided to make trouble for him. He was 100% minding his own business.
Seeing him rolling on the ground, Lou Cheng was thrilled. He had forced Wu Dong of Amateur Second Pin to roll on the ground! A victory was one step away! - DeadBeatWeeb5mthReplied to DaoistrGe4tJ
You are really not using that term properly. There’s nothing self righteous about wanting to give someone who’s helped him a proper burial.
"I do not know who was the senior who left the Jindan, but your junior, I, was lucky to receive it. This is our affinity, and I promise you, one day, when I have accomplished something in martial arts, and can cut and go through water, I will look for your remains and give you the grand burial and prayers you deserve!" - DeadBeatWeeb5mthReplied to Reaper8726
How is this remotely close to making her a goddess?
"It would be impolite to call her directly by her name Yan Zheke, but it's also too frivolous to call her "Zheke", "Xiaoke", or "Keke". That'd just be embarrassing and make her uncomfortable. But then calling her "classmate" or "classmate Yan Zheke" is really weird and feels too distant. - DeadBeatWeeb5mthReplied to Makaroshka
That makes four of us.
With joy overwhelming his worries, Lou Cheng touched his belly and couldn't help but let his imagination run wild for a moment. - DeadBeatWeeb5mthReplied to tatsuya_K_O_A
He just said that he’s homesick……..
Lou Cheng's mood sank even lower as he slowly explained. "It's true, I miss you and Dad, and the braized pork with eggplant, the quick-fried eel and tomato and egg soup that you cooked, and I even miss the garlic that I planted on the balcony..." - DeadBeatWeeb5mthReplied to oscblade
Of all things, you call this plot armor? By definition, that’s not what this is.
Yan Zheke smiled and pointed at a red string around her neck without hesitation, "Can't keep my mobile in this suit. Take my QQ number and I'll add you soon. Don't forget to mention ‘Lou Cheng from class four, No. 1 Middle School.’ I don't accept requests from strangers. My QQ is XXXXXX." - DeadBeatWeeb6mthReplied to Dylan_Hopkins_0665
She was still asleep when he covered her up completely.
She blushed when she realized how scantily clad she was. Had Leonel seen her like this? - DeadBeatWeeb6mthReplied to FreeER_atubeacct
The series literally said that even with him, he didn’t truly want to kill him.
With an abnormal feat of strength, Leonel slammed his palm into the ground, pushing himself and his bike back upright. He had fought with his life on the line for too long to feel the same shuddering nervousness. There had been nothing but him and his own thoughts for months. There was no way he was going to lose to the first person he consciously chose to kill. - DeadBeatWeeb6mthReplied to LuxLucian
He said months.
With an abnormal feat of strength, Leonel slammed his palm into the ground, pushing himself and his bike back upright. He had fought with his life on the line for too long to feel the same shuddering nervousness. There had been nothing but him and his own thoughts for months. There was no way he was going to lose to the first person he consciously chose to kill. - DeadBeatWeeb6mthReplied to Samuel_Wilkins
R.I.P
The Priest was stunned for a moment. Where could he had ever seen such technology? Luckily for Leonel, his silver rod worked with folding technology and not electrical technology, or it would have lost its morphing ability long ago. - DeadBeatWeeb6mthReplied to fearlessj2008
That hasn’t been good enough justification for him early on.
Before Leonel realized it, he had grown numb to the slaughter. After breaking down their lives to mere numbers floating in his mind, it suddenly became easier to do what needed to be done. At the very least, it became easier to use the excuse that the Spanish committed terrible atrocities in this era to bury his guilt. - DeadBeatWeeb6mthReplied to TOG9
It wasn’t actually all of them, just the ones that were assigned there. It was brought up that many more were elsewhere. They also got reinforcements and have changed their tactics to match the estimated strength of the “savages”.
With every encounter, a new possibility was stored in his memory. With this additional data point, he would adjust his fighting style ever so slightly to account for it. Months later, Leonel no longer had to rely on his throwing prowess to gain victory against large groups. Even when battling a group of ten Spaniards, the combination of his inhuman senses and battle experience was enough to take them on. - DeadBeatWeeb6mthReplied to Thomas_Tredwell
Absolute facts.
With every encounter, a new possibility was stored in his memory. With this additional data point, he would adjust his fighting style ever so slightly to account for it. Months later, Leonel no longer had to rely on his throwing prowess to gain victory against large groups. Even when battling a group of ten Spaniards, the combination of his inhuman senses and battle experience was enough to take them on. - DeadBeatWeeb6mthReplied to Mon777
Everyone is monitored 24/7. You don’t think the government would find it suspicious a high ranked former member is teaching his son how to kill to survive?
He had never been formally taught in any martial arts, but as his mind spun and his deductive abilities deepened with his growing senses, he felt as though it didn't matter.