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Draco_Spectra_2382yrReplied to Bit_Lucky- Draco_Spectra_2382yrReplied to Bit_Lucky
Ok, noted.
1.1 : OMNIOUS FEELING. - Draco_Spectra_2382yrReplied to BrewingFantasiesCh 1 1.RETURN OF THE UNDEAD?
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I'm speechless. The writing is just immaculate. The way the sentence is phrased, and with how a few words, a lot of the stuff is conveyed. The world-building is really good. I could just picture myself in that world. I could see myself as a character in this story. Really top-notch work. Craving for more.
- Draco_Spectra_2382yrReplied to 64bites
Me, too. I guess?
This chapter has been deleted. - Draco_Spectra_2382yrPosted
I've only read a few chapters. With that in mind, here's my impression. I appreciate the fact how the narrator just jumps straight into the action without any drama, narrating from a third person's perspective, and then slowly switches and dials it down so that the reader can keep up with the world. It does pique your curiosity, and I'm going to keep an eye out for more.
- Draco_Spectra_2382yrReplied to KaGen
Indeed
"Indeed. So, how come you're at this part of the campus?" It was rather amusing to see him at this part of college. For the uneducated, Marcus is a young and upcoming college athlete by day and a playboy by night. That's how he is! Don't ponder on how we ended up together or why was I hanging out with such a person or vice-versa, though the opposite always baffles me. Just why? - Draco_Spectra_2382yrPosted
I love how the author straight away sets up the grim and dark tone for this story right from the first chapter. Normally, it would sound like a cliche, with how the introduction rolled out. But I was pleasantly surprised how the story was narrated with minimal details and yet had the depth required for you to be interested in. Also, I would like to appreciate the author's writing. I like how he built the world, instead of focusing on the details around him, the author just focuses on the character. It's like a spotlight being cast on a role on stage, and everything else hidden within the shadows. All in all, I'm really excited to see how the story develops.
- Draco_Spectra_2382yrPosted
From what I've read, the world building is pretty consistent. The detailed description of the characters makes it pretty easy to visualise what's going on in that fictional world. In some sense, it feels like this is more of a journal at times, which is not bad by any means, and only adds more to look forward to the different styles one can view this as. Can't wait to read more of it.
- Draco_Spectra_2382yrReplied to suggestaname
Indeed! đ©
Love at the end of the day was just a chemical reaction which you couldn't possibly equate and the fundamental curiosity to just explore it only hinders your ability to know what was right and what was wrong, only for unwanted emotions to act as a catalyst to shatter everything you ever believed in! Source: ME! - Draco_Spectra_2382yrReplied to Noob_chay
It does, to him, that is.
I quickly got up and prevented her from sitting down below with me. "I'm sorry Princess, but I can't allow you to sit down with me. There's a clear difference between you and me", I said, though, all of this with a cold demeanor. I really couldn't care if she was a demon, or a princess or anything, just don't sit near me. It isn't that I hate you by any means whatsoever, but I'd like people to value my privacy. I don't like my private space to have encroached. - Draco_Spectra_2382yrReplied to Noob_chay
That is a possible theory.
"Wait, why was I here again?", Didn't someone send me this letter telling me that they wanted to have a conversation with me? Then, where was the owner of this letter? Plus, my mouth feels dry. I don't know why? Have I been talking to someone? I don't understand. - Draco_Spectra_2382yrReplied to 64bitesCh 6 1.5 : ENCOUNTER?
- Draco_Spectra_2382yrReplied to James_carlCh 4 CURSED FATE!
- Draco_Spectra_2382yrReplied to lon_okami
That's what I'm trying to do.
This chapter has been deleted. - Draco_Spectra_2382yrReplied to VitamorteCh 1 HIS NEW BEGINNING?
- Draco_Spectra_2382yrReplied to ShinobuCh 54 THE TIME HAS COME!
- Draco_Spectra_2382yrReplied to marooned_
Urusai!!!
"Shut up, Idiot!" - Draco_Spectra_2382yrReplied to marooned_
Indeed. So am I.
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