Draco_Spectra_238

Alright. Will do. Just wait 🌝

Ok, noted.

Alright, thank you for the feedback. Will do so

I'm speechless. The writing is just immaculate. The way the sentence is phrased, and with how a few words, a lot of the stuff is conveyed. The world-building is really good. I could just picture myself in that world. I could see myself as a character in this story. Really top-notch work. Craving for more.

Me, too. I guess?

I've only read a few chapters. With that in mind, here's my impression. I appreciate the fact how the narrator just jumps straight into the action without any drama, narrating from a third person's perspective, and then slowly switches and dials it down so that the reader can keep up with the world. It does pique your curiosity, and I'm going to keep an eye out for more.

Indeed

I love how the author straight away sets up the grim and dark tone for this story right from the first chapter. Normally, it would sound like a cliche, with how the introduction rolled out. But I was pleasantly surprised how the story was narrated with minimal details and yet had the depth required for you to be interested in. Also, I would like to appreciate the author's writing. I like how he built the world, instead of focusing on the details around him, the author just focuses on the character. It's like a spotlight being cast on a role on stage, and everything else hidden within the shadows. All in all, I'm really excited to see how the story develops.

From what I've read, the world building is pretty consistent. The detailed description of the characters makes it pretty easy to visualise what's going on in that fictional world. In some sense, it feels like this is more of a journal at times, which is not bad by any means, and only adds more to look forward to the different styles one can view this as. Can't wait to read more of it.

Indeed! 🎩