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The passage about humankind makes us think about how much human vainness and/or dependence makes social interactions complex but at the same time mysterious and beautiful.

Really well written looking forward to reading the following chapters, the style is clean and fluid, the descriptive abilities are amazing and immersive; furthermore the plot is great. I really hope to get more details about zale's past but also the main charachter's identity. keep it up!!!

So much suspense!