90astralvn

the story and plot is so good and well thought , the characters are fresh the story hooks from the start and starts dope but if the writer chooses some other words in some paragraphs it could connect more overall good read

The story and plot is so amazing and well written the characters are unique in their own way. But in the starting chps it seemed like the actions and dialogue were not syncing but it got better in further chps well done author

nice story good work