Leenia_Sunsmite

Stay away, its grammer , story building and character progression are one of the worse ones in novels I have read so far Honestly reading this only helped me realize what actual gems of a novel I have been blessed with. ( Perverts World, fullfilling my Lust full fantasies, Debauchery Village Head)

pure horror to get through the first couple of chapters... - Horrible grammer, very difficult to read. - no story just sex scenes and even those are written like 16 y teenager first time writing sex scenes " hey women me horny, you horny? let's do it! ah yes good , the end " Even for readers looking for basic "snu snu" I can't recommend reading this novel. Try reading instead for real enjoyment " a Perverts World" or " Village Head Debauchery ".

grammar is horrible, why don't you try using chat gpt to fix it?

that's little bit to much but I do agree that this novel is far from good in many aspects.

Not for me and I'm female reader.I figure some guys don't mind it as long as two girls are going at it urgh...For me it's its straight gay porn, no thanks.

that chapter gave encouragement and trust that this MC is no japanese beta loser. Now I can wholeheartedly support this story.[img=recommend]

I thought this novel had no ntr?

disappointing read even tough the premise was more then promising.story structure...abysmal. character behavior...mindless npc's.world building...so messy that a reader might be confused where mc or any fmc is located at any time given.fingercrossed author might improve it or make his next novel writing better.

its so messy i dont know what is going on anymore. Could the author try giving his chapters to some fans to proof-read first?

how does his old memory help him understand what a good and bad status build would look like when I believe the whole system feature is something most MCs alone can use let alone even see? Or can anyone open this status window?[img=thinking]