First of all , I just appreciate tge effort and the commitment to write such a novel in this early age of you. Another thing I wanna mention how good the story is and how it can make you go with the details and immerse your self into the world of the story. Lastly I just wanna mention that some chapters are short, I know it is hard to make a consistent length but I hope it is more lengthy. Overall I really enjoyed reading and looking forward for more 🥰✌