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Nah momo is such an overused and boring ship
It would’ve been cool if not for the spelling mistakes you need an editor bro 😭
All I’m saying is no sleeper aside from the first lords cohort has killed anything like a fallen devil and you literally said the lieutenants have each killed fallen devil which is cap it’s only stated that gunslaug and harus have and maybe some lieutenants killed fallen beasts not once is it mentioned to be a devil
I never said he did and who tf is max
Literally no sleeper Aside from the cohort has killed a fallen devil anyone aside from maybe Gunslaug gets low diffed and even he isn’t winning a 1v1 it’s only stated they’ve killed fallen ranked beasts nothing insane like a devil
Sunny is 16 right now turns 17 during the winter solstice and 18 during the forgotten shores I think
Jet Romance?
The story line makes zero sense and way too much ai used for sentences and too many inconsistencies and plot holes it’s a really good concept it simply wasn’t executed as good as it could’ve been
I genuinely have no words for how godly this chapter was the build up and everything just
High chunin level and about to hit jonin and don’t get all mad because jonin in this story are actual monsters and not canon fodder this story has the best representation of power in Naruto