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bdbobdover23dCommentedCh 659 You Talk Too Much- bdbobdover30dCommented
needful necessary?
"No, but he has done the needful necessary for the cure to be created," Dr. Levi replied. - bdbobdover1mthCommented
drawn -> *dawn
She would have to be his guide! She won't let him out of her sight lest someone else dared to try taking him away from her! His light was too bright that she was sure there were others that would be dawn to it, so she must be on her guard at all times! She would serve him all his life! - bdbobdover1mthCommented
fair -> fair share*
This paragraph has been deleted. - bdbobdover1mthCommented
The proper word is gall not gull.
The video ended, Chu Li cleared his throat, looked at all the soldiers and said, "Everyone must be really clear about what happened today, when enemies showed up, these espers stood up for us, they protected the civilians, and they protected our home. The majority of them were not soldiers. Some of them were businessmen, some were professors, some students, and one of them was even a groom. They stood out to protect the civilians, was it because of the 2000 $UC bonus we give me every month? NO! Of course not, because lives are priceless. They were that courageous because they felt it was their responsibility as espers! And to avenge for those respected brothers, it's our responsibility as soldiers! The results were clear! Madman Yiwan, a rogue esper from the Russian district directed this slaughter! Their ultimate goal was the underground bank safe, and the raiders were responsible for causing chaos and distracting us. All these people died just so they could rob the bank so Yi Wan could convert it to Galactic currency. I just don't get it, we are all espers, and some are willing to give up their lives to protect our homeland! But some have the gull to plan how to kill their own kind? What kind of fucked up reality is that?! The raiders from outer-space are hated, but the traitors of Earth deserve the worst death possible!" - bdbobdover1mthCommented
*warn -> warm
Inside the base was chaos. The alarms and lights were warning people to evacuate as quickly as possible but the large plane that was currently inside the factory already did more than enough to warm them. - bdbobdover1mthCommented
it off -> *out of
The former samples of the drug were less than satisfactory. Most of the test subjects went mad and began trying to attack other people. They were able to kill or capture them before things got it off hand but the doctor still kept them to test on them every now and then. - bdbobdover1mthCommented
instant shot protruded?
Icicle-like rocks instant shot protruded from sides of the opening on the wall at fast speed, sealing the hole Gustav created in a manner of moments. - bdbobdover1mthCommented
explosives -> explosion
Gustav dashed across the place, attaching the pinky finger-sized explosion to walls and ceilings. - bdbobdover1mthReplied to Mr_Babbles
I agree
Multiple heads were instantly lopped of flying towards across the air as blood sprayed across the floors and walls. - bdbobdover1mthCommented
You don't need to keep saying repeatedly
He stabbed the chest area and neck of the Red Jacket repeatedly, which eventually ended up sending him to the afterlife. - bdbobdover1mthCommented
remove *again
Gustav slammed him again against the wall with his left hand wrapped around the Red Jacket's neck. He arched his right hand back while gripping onto the hilt tightly before stabbing forward repeatedly. - bdbobdover1mthCommented
remove *size
A finger-sized size hole could be seen in his neck area, which blood began to jet out of. - bdbobdover1mthCommented
So, he fought that zombie for nearly 4 hours?
[Departure time:01:10:05] - bdbobdover3mthCommented
We not he
"This... Luckily he got teleported in time before he severed my head from my neck," Gustav explained. - bdbobdover3mthCommented
Louis not Lois
Officer Lois walked over to it and pulled the wrap from its body. Sahil's unconscious body was displayed, floating within the circular structure with restraints on his hands and neck. - bdbobdover3mthCommented
Trial not trail
"Keep quiet! Keep your remarks to yourself till the date of your trail with the disciplinary counsel," Officer Milly voiced out as she grabbed hold of Gustav and forcefully pulled him up.