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I like the way you use content from other stories because the original story itself is a lame copycat.

This is supposed to be “he” not “she”

Thanks for pointing it out I’ll correct it!

Author obviously takes inspiration from “The World of Otome Games is Tough for Mobs” which isn’t exactly a bad thing. The writing quality however is definitely not the best. As a native English speaker the sentences are hard to follow at best and near unreadable at worst.

Kepler-47 is a binary star system though.

I’ve read up to where it is currently, but from what I can tell so far, it’s very good. The world is genuinely thought out and the characters show real emotion. Of course there are some tropes, however that seems to a major plot point the story will revolve around. There are very minor grammar errors around the story but nothing large enough to justify a lower than 5 star rating. The only glaring I see right now is the update schedule. Creativity is hard to come by sometimes though so I have that a 3 for now. No issues anywhere else though. If you’re similar to me and you like reading reviews before starting a story, you should definitely give this story a try. There aren’t many chapters currently, but I’m sure you might enjoy it. I hope this review will give the author a little motivation through this story. :))

His little brother?

Anders?

Presume is a pretty big word! Good job nick! :)

Made me chuckle