Yameteyoo

Are we talking about Madara from the Naruto series? Well, it's true that 1-2% can't handle everything, but the majority can. And I never said that everything could be handled with just this power. As for the story, it's okay... This is just a recommendation that changing a character's identity too much is not much different from destroying that character.

Okay, sorry for not writing clearly. Let’s start with the first part—I’m not sure if you realize this, but the power scale between the two series is vastly different. You’re intentionally nerfing the power way too much. Even at his first stage, Madara could take down most ghouls in the series, including Rize. It’s like a level 99 character fighting level 1 monsters but still acting scared, even though he keeps saying in almost every line of the novel that he ‘knows everything.’ (I might be exaggerating a bit, but that’s the general idea.) And the most confusing part is the combat. I don’t understand—did the main character inherit experience or not? Because he acts like he did. Why do I think that? Because there’s no trial run, no training, not even a mention of it, which is not something an inexperienced person would do, even if he were a child. And if he didn’t inherit the experience, then it contradicts what’s shown, because, as I said, he doesn’t seem to worry about using it at all. Then there’s the issue of abilities—it seems like you didn’t study them properly, which makes things even more confusing... Okay, onto the next part. Why did I complain about Rize? Because I assumed she would be the heroine (?) or at least play an important role in the story. You made me question the main character’s thought process, which you might not think is important. Even among ghouls, Rize is infamous for her cruelty toward her victims. And don’t forget—she doesn’t just kill because she’s hungry; she kills for fun. So why does the main character act like he likes her so much, even though he ‘knows everything,’ as you keep writing over and over? It’s like knowing your friend is a psychotic serial killer and still liking them, even wanting to start a relationship with them. I don’t get it at all. And then there’s the whole issue with her past, which you kept complaining about. At first, it seemed tragic… at first. But after that, what part of it is even sad? Even if she wasn’t hunted by her family, with what she has done, there’s nothing tragic about it. Her title wasn’t given to her as a joke. And let’s not even get into the protagonist’s way of thinking. Honestly, just stop ‘knowing everything’ already. Because, damn, he doesn’t understand a single thing. (I translated this using GPT, sorry for any weird translations.)[img=disgusted]

Really? Then if it's a Heroic Spirit with a legend, and the Akashic Records record it, would the Heroic Spirit be aware of it? Since they exist beyond time, even in the case of an Archer, who shouldn't exist because he has no legend.

Not as good as I thought, but not too bad. For those who are interested because JJK is not recommended that much. Focuses on the HP universe more than just adding curse power, but it is not that outstanding. The author tried to combine the power system between curse and magic together. Which is a completely different system. It makes the thing that creates the power system that has no highlight, which seems unnecessary. In the main character section, the author tried to create a character who is "smart" and strong since childhood, but no, he is not smart at all. The power that he has is inconsistent. The more he acts like a puppet who is manipulated, there are many unnecessary things. Including the family that the author tried to force in, creating relationships and emotions that do not really exist. What did he get after entering the family besides money and power, which comes with many problems and burdens? The power that he has did not increase after entering the family. Do not mention knowledge. No. There is no such point in the story except to specify the family history. ... This point, I will not talk about it anymore. It is more than enough.

It can be said that after reading it, I felt empty, not fun or enjoyable. It was so ordinary that I don't know what words to use to describe it. The storyline was too forced and not natural at all.

You might think that a spirit beast with wisdom is like an ordinary animal. You're mistaken. Their life cycle is different. With a lifespan of over 100 thousand years, that's just a small part of their life. Moreover, since this is a cultivation novel, there's no need to reference a human lifespan of 100 thousand years.

You have some issues in your brain. You gave a 1-star rating because you didn't like the story, not because of the writing, plot, or bad writing. That's your problem. Just scroll past this novel if you don't like it. 

The more I read, the worse it gets. The plot is very poorly designed. Each character has a strange relationship. The MC gains too much power in a few chapters, making the storyline unclear because the plot moves too fast. It gets even worse when the MC starts building an organization that is completely useless to both the MC and the story. And the logic in the beginning starts to disappear in just a few chapters.

The story is excellent, as usual, still of good quality[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong]

The story is really great. Even though the number of episodes is a little less. But the quality is very good.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]